Chapter 6: A keychain... oh no. Oh no, this is just so cute. Really, and the fact that Yoongi's a guy who has killed people and deals with a lot from Insomnia and Nightmare, just the thought of him with a strawberry keychain is too much for my heart. I like the way you wrote his response! It leaves me feeling amused, and I'm certainly looking forward to what's in store for the two now.
Keep going! So far, this is coming together very interestingly!
Chapter 3: Again! A very interesting take on writing. Three chapters and I'm still amazed, not to mention at the edge of my seat here waiting to see what happens and how things unfold.
I'm really enjoying the little bits and pieces of Yoongi you've showed so far. Keep it up!
Chapter 2: Wow. Still as intriguing as the first chapter! I must say, if it doesn't come across as a poem, it plays the part of a play really well. I can almost imagine these as scenes, with Yoongi's thoughts, intentions, and actions all being presented to us in ways that aren't detailed, but still have just as strong an impact.
I'm very curious to see where this goes.
Chapter 1: Isn't this interesting! The fact that it takes on the format of a poem is intriguing, I must say. It gives me just enough of an idea of what Yoongi's seemingly going through with insomnia and chronic nightmares, and I'm quite keen to learn more.
All the best updating!
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