Chapter 9: https://www.asianfanfics.com/blog_page/view/3268

i managed to fix up jae(though sort of badly)

the changes in the white side are in bold, and the ones in the dark side are bolded AND italicized (unless it was his negative trait elaborations, which i changed random things and didn't mark because.... yeah)

I was too lazy to have him as another plotline so i just kept him the knight, and also if any of the links don't work again just tell me. it's because from my html editor to aff's, they add a rel='nofollow', which s everything up.

are you giving extensions? jgnsdkjgbskld i need to fix my app and try to make the other one i promised but ;;

Chapter 8: C h i l d I promise I will get to fixing them but can I have an extension?? How long depends on your needs but at least until July 31 would be hella nice ;;; sorry for being so needy fffffs

Chapter 20: I’m working on my app! almost done ><

Requesting extension until at least July 31 ;; maybe later if I don’tnget Internet in China

why ,,,, why havent i checked this out earlier? ahwaeeee
maybe expect an app from me mm maybe ;;;

Chapter 8: oh noooo i still haven't fixed my apps ;;;; i'll likely be able to do them after tomorrow though so... if i need more time i;ll tell you

Chapter 8: eyyyy :D

Chapter 9: i will fix ;;;; sometime soon ;;;; and yeah i wrote them in pretty much one sitting so like 'dark side = dark personality' LMAOOOO

maybe i'll get them done in a week? or maybe it'll take a few weeks ;;; but like

i will get them done :")))

Chapter 9: yeah lmao i sort of bullted his dark side because i had no clue what to do

i'll fix him up soon ;)))))) but i'm glad you liked it

Chapter 9: thanks for the review! lmao yeah the warlock stuff confused me a bit, japanese names make my head spin, i must've been sleep deprived when i pasted the link (this happened a lot with the apps i sent in over the weekend) AND no worries, i'll fix the app asap :) thank you again for the review :D

Chapter 18: O h okay establishing carroll?? B I G energy LOL but I can’t tell what’s going on yet hhhhh

Chapter 18: a TEASER WOW YES
i still have a few more papers before my exams finish up so totally relatable :')

grndnauguhter i just have a aqustion
sortof ed in the head as you can see

i don't really get the underworlder part of gemini? i mean like i know it's like they have a dark side and a light side, and the dark side is the underworlder part, but i'm still just sort of confused... like gemini is so entwined in their lives that their underworlder part is literally like, their night form? and they're successful because of their dark side or no?

Chapter 9: hello snowball lezgetit (i've been watching too many jaesix vids i'm so sorry)
?? aesthetics?? where?? i just wanted something Dark to go with this story jfgkfgjdf
stylish is good he's a fashion designer LMAO
well we all expect Hyunwook to be crossing boundaries so,,, you know,,, and yeah it's just so them i had to
yes it's the only way to speak of shin fam. and yes. if someone looks at his sisters he'll tear out their eyes. :)
I thought you read hangul, and no not because you're asian, i'm pretty damn sure you're from hong kong.
Purrfection is the queen bee of the Shin-Lee household. and yes, I felt Wook's quote was...accurate.
Okay so, yes I forgot to mention when his father started, but Jiae and Jinheo were still too young to stop locking them up at that point lol
...snowball i have A Lot to introduce you to when you visit me here in oklahoma some day when we're Old
if you'd ever been to a fairground in america, you'd Know. it's just like, so gross. all the fairgrounds i've been to have been loud, vomity (like seriously people puke everyingwhere), highly unsafe, creepy, et cetera. the only good thing is the food but it's way overpriced.
JINEUL'S MOM IS A SHE DESERVED IT lmao yeah Jineul's probably like "shut UP hyunwook"
I mean I can write out a schedule for him...?
OKAY THE TRUTH IS I WAS LAZY AND TIRED AND DIDN'T WANT TO WRITE OUT THE COUSINS BUT I SHALL (some, not all. there's so m a n y) I ALSO FORGOT TO LINK THE CHARACTER PLAYLIST... WHICH I SHALL DO WHEN I EDIT/FIX THIS
brendon was his best friend in america but they don't talk anymore so,,, no need for him!
yeah uh, Jineul's a cat lady
yeah okay i'll translate the hangul ;;; w ;;;
I FELL UP THE STAIRS A LOT AS A CHILD SO IT'S ING POSSIBLE >:o
THE PERSONALITY WROTE ITSELF I DIDN'T DO IT honestly who needs a cute fluff when you can have a savage virgo in the house
aight aight i'll find fansites on tumblr or make short galleries or smthn
of course he's hot he's sungjong i mean what
yeah Sungjong's old lmaoooo
OKAY OKAY MORE FAMILY SHALL BE ELABORATED GEEZ I WON'T WALK AWAY FROM THIS UNSCATHED
jinheo's a baby but not that much of a baby my god
IF YOU DO KILL THEM OFF MAKE IT B R U T A L

Yes I remember using that pic for ITM ;D
no, he doesn't wear pants, he does not Like pants, pants are too Restrictive, he wears cloth shorts under his skirts but no Pants
yes to all of that. yeah.... nymphalis probably wants to kill wookiewoogie ngl :'D
yes yes i shall add all of that and yes, they were
everyone say it with me: Poor Poor Hyunwook
yes yes okay fine i shall add The Family
jineul's battleaxe was a gift from his grandfather which i suppose i shall add to his background
okay but like -- give details on developing magic i have no idea how this works lend a hand save a sister
i suppose i shall add more details :'D
yeah it was supposed to be collar but i wrote it at 1am give me a break
wait he does? i didn't even Read hyunwook's app gkdnkdgjk
...i figured there were weapons in this 'verse with magic in them? XDDDDD

alright snowball i shall get to correcting! no worries this is still a long review and i still <3 you so :'D

Chapter 9: SO N HOW IS MIN SO FAST I barely had time to study much less think about apps

Chapter 9: bruh that review is already a chapter long i'm-

Chapter 4: pst what are the abilities of elves

also, I don't get what it means when it says 'fill this in with where the unhuman parent is from yadayada'. is there a list of towns/ in the underworld somewhere that i missed?