Chapter 6: Aww.. I loved it. ;(
'Twas a good one, thank you for spending time and using great effort to complete it. I know I'm late but you did it!! Cu soon? :D
Congratulations on winning Honorable Mention in Young Blood: A Writing Contest!
It was interesting reading from the perspective where Winner is Winner but everyone else is a “civilian.” There were parts where the tension of Mino’s career versus Hayi’s were explored, but it mostly felt like background information. Hayi’s relationship and complex toward Bobby were the major focus, but I felt as if more could have gone into developing things with Mino. Overall, I really enjoyed this story. Hayi was mature, but still trying to keep things together, which is my favorite Hayi personality dynamic. You did a great job with the build up of Hayi’s emotions. I seriously felt frustrated when she was frustrated, wanted to cry when she was upset, etc. Congratulations and I hope to read even more from you in the future.
Chapter 4: No ur not ruining the flow this is great and really satisfying and when I reached the end of this chapter I was on the verge of crying cause I don't want it to end plz update soon ♡
Chapter 3: MINO come on, make her yours and make her happy so that Jiwon would regret his decision forever. but serioisly, does he not love hayi? but why would he named his child hayi? update soon authornim
Chapter 3: Wow well I had a feeling that might have been the reason Bobby and Jisoo both disappeared at the same time. But why is he being a douche and not being honest with Hayi?
Chapter 2: What the hell author?! You left me hanging for more! Holy balls! We all know who Bobby is...lol...Kim Jiwon.
There are so many questions that is running through my mind. Like, why did Bobby vanish before high school? And why did he cut ties with Hayi? Is he working for a gang? Is he trying to pay some debt off? Did he ever have feelings for Hayi? Or did he run away with Jisoo?
Since this is going to be a BobHi fanfic, how does Mino character play a role on here? Was he really jealous that Hayi had a thing for Bobby? Will Mino be a threat to Bobby? Do I smell a love triangle?
I want more author. Don't leave me hanging like this. Please update soon!
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