I feel a little bad for Dae. She just wants to be loved.
And yet, she's doesn't feel it.
I hope Dae will end up as a good character in the end.
She seems nice and just misread.
:)
Update when you can!~ ^-^
Wow, I read this story in one , even though I must confess that when I started it, I didn't think I'd get so involved^^ However, I really appreciated it in the end, and that's why I'm writing this review^^
What I loved the most about this story is how all its characters behave: in almost every fanfic (about Jonghyun and Key and another girl "in the way") that I've read so far, the girl was described as a sort of cruel devil, Key was the innocent victim and Jongyun probably needed a godd exorcism. And this got on my nerves XD: sure, this kind of stories provide good "fangirling" material, but still they're not so realistic. What I appreciated the most it's how Key is described as a victim, but at the same time as the tormentor. And not only towards the couple, but also towards himself, since he seems so fond of hurting himself emotionally. Besides, he doesn't really see how at fault he is sometimes, and that's also very realistic.
Dae is an annoying rival, but at the same time is just a girl who fell in love and suffers as any normal neglected girlfriend. And Jonghyun seems really torn between the two (even though it seems now he's come to some sort of realization,) and not a schizofrenic, bipolar guy.
What I'm trying to say, it's that there aren't good and bad characters in this fic, 'cause they're all both at the same time, and I appreciate it^^ a lot! XD
Furthermore, your style is quite good: it's pleasant and fluent. It actually gives you the urge to continue reading XD
Well...I don't think I've got anything else to say^^ I'm sorry for eventual mistakes and I hope that what I wrote was comprehensible, since English is not my mother tongue^^". Besides, to tell the truth, I'm quite sleepy right now, so I don't trust my linguistic abilities lol
Well, I'll be waiting for the next chapter then! Bye!
Looks very interesting^^ (Hehe new reader)
I think your writing style is really nice and the plot's really good :D
All I can say right now is...POOR KIBUMMIE Dx
Junghwa did make Key see the brighter side of things.
But he's slowly falling down and losing his personality...
Dae... I don't know how I feel about her. She's just a girl who loves her boyfriend who's slipping out of her grasp.
Dae is okay in my opinion. But not 100% good :p
Update soon~! :) please?
Oh dear, as much as I would like Key to be with Jonghyun, I really think it's because of the latter that Key is starting to lose who he is. It's really, almost not normal to see how much Key loves Jonghyun, because his dense personality has only done none but cause Key to spiral into this... What do you call it? Key's depressed, isn't he?
Honestly, Jjong doesn't deserve Key, but I think he's starting to feel something for him; I swear, that scene where Key and Jonghyun reunite was executed so nicely, and subtle leaving a deep impression on the readers. I love how you're not rushing their possible romance between them, and this story is written so seamlessly. Oh man, I'm jealous--why do I keep saying that? Because I am jealous over the fact that you're able to position me, the reader just exactly where you want me to be. I feel so sad for Key, I think Junghwa is such a perfect character; I smile every time he's mentioned, and I'm so mad reading how Jonghyun is still under the illusion that Key likes Dae.
And I can't believe Key was so caught up with his own dilemma that he had unknowingly washed off junghwa's number! HIS NUMBER! Ohh, i'm so in love with his character; he's so admirable in the way he's dealing with the loss of Kai. I mean, it's been a few years, yeah, but I don't think he can ever move on; he's just able to deal with it. Okay, I'm rambling and I'm suddenly remembering how Dae interrupted their potential JongKey scene... Eugh, stupid Dae! Just burn in hell! Kay, that may be out of line...
Ive always loved Jjong.....but how the heck can you be such an IDIOT!!! Get a GRIP man, those feelings you got is called love homie!!! Screw the retarted jerkface girlfriend you got you've got Key just make it work T^T.....*ahem* sorry i uh, got a little carried away there
The only thing that made me wanna cry in this chapter was the fact that Key lost Jungwha's number ;-; all the hardships with Jonghyun and his punishment from the manager upset me too, but I just hate so badly that he lost Jungwha's number...he was the only bright thing in Key's life right now. I hope he can find that brightness again, soon.
Jjong is being and this is pissing me off. -flips tables- He better wake up before he loses Key forever. Dae is not as sweet as she acts. She annoys me. This is frustarting...I think Key should just leave. I would. He can't get over Jjong this way.
I feel as if they didn't even miss him.
No one seemed to care. Jonghyun maybe... His manager just got angry.
Atleast ask him if he's okay and how he's been and maybe a hug or two.
Noooooo! Key! You stupid head! Pleaaaaase tell me someone that saw Key's hand has photographic memory or something! Aish! And Jjong is still being a ing poopbucket with his stupid girlfriend and- AND THIS IS NOT THE GODDAMNED REALITY I WANTED!!!
Comments