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Beau1996 1334 streak #1
Chapter 1: A lovely little story! Cute kiddos and my favorite ship!!
bbhlove #2
Chapter 1: Goodness reading this in 2022 😭 this reminds me of jongdae now
IceQueenChogiwa 1075 streak #3
Chapter 1: Reading this for the second time and it feels even more beautiful because of the recent events ♡♡
so cute ! TT__TT
IceQueenChogiwa 1075 streak #4
"your oppa has a kid already. Deal with it. Kkkk" this goea so much with the current situation xD
chanyolk_bacon #5
Chapter 1: I keep rereading this cause its just so good
cassi90 #6
Chapter 1: This was utterly cute!!! I enjoyed reading it <3
Thank you!!
rheaaa #7
Chapter 2: waaah this is soooo Cuteee ??
jekyun #8
This is so cuteee! ㅠㅠ
17ktop #9
Chapter 1: I thought that this story was really cute, I really enjoyed how it played out ^_^
Mrsparkpeki #10
Chapter 1: This is soooo good ಥ‿ಥಥ‿ಥ
anneber #11
Chapter 1: This was AWESOME!!! Thank you for your talent!
pamela_one #12
Chapter 1: love ittt, after i read the cy sang 'isnt she lovely' to chohee almost made me bawl (good thing i didnt cause im in public..)

GOOD JOB!!!!
BaekYeolFan_ #13
Chapter 1: So wholesome <3 just picturing this was heartwarming
izy_angelic #14
Chapter 3: Oh dang. Came back to reread for nth times. Hmm. Still loving it.
♡~♡
Myorii #15
Chapter 1: Herm, sorry, I'll need to make a negative comment. It's my first time, pardon me.
Firstly, I do think your fic is sweet and cute and I don't really dislike it. And I like your fics in general, I love your writing. However I dislike certain things you say in this particular fic. Concerning marriage. I understand that we have different believes, but your words hurt me. So I hope you understand that I need to say it. I have nothing against marriage and I love domestic fic, BUT, in my opinion, marriage is NOT a finality nor a need for a couple with children. A child DO NOT need to have married parents to be happy. But it's exactly what you say a numerous time in this fic (and rather clearly). And I do understand that you think that marriage is the best way to prove your love and to rise your child. Many peoples believe it, and it's old tradition in the all world. And it's not bad, people do what they want. But I hope you understand that reading a fic where you see repeatedly that if the parents don't marry, their child will be unhappy and feel unloved when you are yourself a child of unmarried parents, could hurt. Because I rassure you, I always feel loved by my parents, married or not, together or not (and I'm not the only one). So reading that my parents don't love me and that i'm a bastard because they not married is not the best feeling.
What I mean is, it's understable that someone want that their lover propose to them. But I think it's a desire, a romantic desire. And I love reading fic like that, because proposal is cute. But make it look like a necessity for the good of a child is not sweet, or cute, or romantic and it's does not add anything to the story. But it's can be hurting people like me. Please take that in consideration. No hard feeling I hope.
(And sorry for your eyes, it's not my first language)
Nicai1991 #16
Chapter 3: I love the story!!! ChanBaek fighting!
L1ght17 #17
Chapter 1: This is so sweet, I love it <3
Chanbaekksii #18
Chapter 1: Loved it!
Kaisooismyoxygen #19
Chapter 1: OMG THIS WAS SO GOOD!!!!!

i loved the angst and how chanyeol was, how selfless baek was too. at first i was mad at yeol for not marrying baek but i understood his reason later and well... it made sense!!! their couple story was super cute omg and that amusement park date!!!!!! AHH THEY GOT MARRIED AND HAD ANOTHER BABY I'M SO EMO CRIES THANK YOU FOR WRITING