Chapter 27: I get random thoughts like " how can yixing be so sweet and kind yet so coldhearted and crazy at the same time" but then i remember that those two characters are from totally separate universes. Korey you did such a good job characterizing these two vastly differing characters that I sometimes get confused. Baekhyun's and luhan's change in personality in this universe throws me off as well
Chapter 18: The struggle of getting ready is real. I have a mild ocd when it comes to food and clothes. For food, different types of food (steak, carrots, rice etc) cannot touch each other and one type of food has to be eaten before i can move onto the next one (eat all carrots then all broccoli). For clothes i have 4 colors (black gray white and navy blue). So getting dressed shoildnt be a problem since i basically have similar combinations but i end up taking 30 min to get dressed
Chapter 15: This chapter made me laugh cuz of how awkwardly funny it is. At first i thought the bodyguard who liked yeonhees shirt was chanyeol but then i remembered he's already a character so lol scratch my plan of figuring out who it is. Poor yixing getting surprised like that
Chapter 14: Im so sad! This chapter really pulls at my heart and makes me tear up. But as sad as the situation is, yeonhee's "uh prince called me" thing made me giggle
Chapter 13: Lol i just cant seem to get used to luhan being a serious character like in tbbc or dmad. His face seems too innocent to be someone so powerful. But i love it cuz its different. Ive been getting less than 2 hours a sleep every night for the past week cuz ive been busy so my comments will be shorter than id like from now until sunday.
Chapter 11: Its nice to read about a character's opinion on free health care because America doesn't have it and I'm not very familiar with it. It's interesting that royal families tend to have that celebrity status. I used to live in a country where the royal family was like god. They really worked to make life better for all the people; the king himself worked in fields to help come up with more efficient ways to farm. But sometimes there are royals who dont do much other than ceremonial things. But that all has to do with how much power the royals still have in the government.
Chapter 10: This chapter is so fun, a simple outing, a talk with the"hunk", and just Baekhyun. He's so adorable and hilarious. Ah, I think there is a typo when Yeonhee apologized and “Baekhyun gave her an odd lock".
Chapter 9: I wish I had a friendship like Yeonhee and Baekhyun. It's so pure and heartwarming to see them interact because it's a relationship I'm not familiar with. They dont seem to have a typical friendship nor a relationship like that of family or lovers. Shows that relationships are what the two or more parties make it to be.
Chapter 8: This whole situation is a mess and I get a feeling this sort of thing happens quite often in fields other than politics. Lots of manipulation and incorrect info in media. Also, recently reconnected with an old friend who I had a really rough falling out with. I love how relatable you make these characters and situations because only good writers excell at that stuff. My friend is actually an artist and drew an image of an inside joke and I ended up seeing it and contacting her.
Chapter 7: I can just feel the tension in the room. Kind of made me want to throw up but that might just be my GERD acting up. Poor Yixing. He must feel awfully disappointed because of Yeonhee's reaction to his identity. But I was bursting out laughing because of how long it took Yixing's comment to sink in. I feel like I've also done something similar to Yeonhee but I can't remember what.
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I tried looking for the Chen reference. The only possible ones I found are in the very beginning when Yeonhee realizes that blocking him, deleting app, and shutting off computer won't hide her identity, and when Yeonhee thinks about one of the other bodyguards seeing who threw the rock.
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Yixing's speech always touches me. There's so many things going on in the world, it's hard for me to remember what it really means to be a citizen of a country. Yixing's speech really reminded me that I have to take action to change things instead of complaining and hoping others will change for me. Also thumbs up for the mutual respect, trust and love vs. mutual obligation. That's important in every relationship and I was again reminded that I need to change the way I approach people. After all, it's very hard for me to keep a good relationship going whether its family, friends, and peers.
Chapter 5: Taehyung is a jerk. No ex (or any other person) should ever harass someone. But after Mr Handsome, Perfect Bodyguard shooed Taehyung away, I had this little creepy smile going on just waiting for lonelyblues to reveal he is a male. Yeonhee's reaction to discovering lonelyblues is Yixing is so understandable. Trust me, I would have scrambled out of there faster than my dog when she hears me getting her treat ready. Though I do wonder how the plot would have developed if she actually stayed and had dinner with him.
Chapter 4: First of all, Sehun's reaction to Yeonhee dropping her phone down her shirt and Chanyeol's reaction to her getting it out is golden. I wish I could do that but I'm as flat as the Colorado's Great Plains. Also did you use the melody of a specific children's song as a guide for Juan My Beauty? I would love to hum this song as well. I also remember when I first read this, I was completely clueless about lonelyblues' identity but the thought that lonelyblues is Yixing did cross my mind for a short second. But aw, I kind of miss that feeling. I just reread everything to often to forget events so it can't be helped ( well I still get this feeling when I read a new book. Currently reading Us Against You and The Shadows We hide.)
Chapter 3: I, too, will get a plant and develop a relationship with it just like yeonhee and juan. But honestly it might help me. Things are a bit rough now so maybe a plant who just listens will make things easier. And rereading this is so nice because i learn a lot of lessons through your writing and repeating it helps commit it to memory
Chapter 2: I love that you included all those comments from lonelyblues. Some writers would have left it out but i think it adds a very wholesome feeling to the situation and its very relatable. Also when lonelyblues says "im assuming your female", its a small detail that adds to the character in a natural way. Most people would say just "babe" because if someone mentions ex-boyfriend, they wouldnt even assume the speaker is female. In their brain they BELIEVE the speaker is female. Just shows lonelyblues is conscious about correctly identifying people's gender and uality. But maybe im reading too much into it
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