Chapter 6: whoa... they're kissing

Chapter 3: i bet they'll fall for each other for true in the end although their engagement was fake.

Chapter 1: this is sooo... interesting, i love it, i love reading story with main cast byun baekhyun, thanks for inform me this in my wall.

Chapter 20: I think it's good if you're gonna do some edits. Just tell us which part has been edited. We'll do good in adapting to new edits.

Chapter 20: i really love reading this story, its alright for me if you dont add any chapter, the story is already fun to read..you can avoid getting the same mistake and write better on your other story!

Chapter 20: just let it, but I hope you make an epilog and having one or two bonus chapter :))

Chapter 20: I do t think you need to fix this story .. You can write a new story with different character and you can just make it better that way you don't have to work twice as much

i just want to say that your story poster is so beautiful..it suit with your story so well! waoo..hot Baekhyunnnnie there...

Chapter 19: I don't believe this! It's finished?! I just started reading it a few days ago and it's already done!?, even before I could catch up with the latest updates and start commenting? Waaa.. I really am very slow at catching up with things!

Whatever it is, I'll just comment about the whole story instead of a comment on each of the chapters. I have no choice anyway!

Well, I loved the concept here. That's the reason why I subscribed to the story in the first place. Everything about the two protagonists is cute and beautiful at the same time. Since my bias is Baekhyun, I concentrated much on his parts in the story and analyzed his character until the end. I loved how he was very protective of his loved one and tried his best to keep her away from any sort of problems. Don't feel bad but, I still feel a bit angry at Sera for not disclosing the matters to Baek as soon as she found out about what her father was up to. (Just my feelings.. Don't worry about it.. :))

You have done a pretty good job and I'd like to see more of stories coming from your side. Take care and keep smiling :)

-Miss S.

Chapter 18: Whyy Jaejoong is so cute in this chapter like "omg the great infamous mobster is going to be my fking in-law and imma stay here feeling sick of all these jokes" xD xD

no wonder Baekhyun is sweet, he smell like choclate! hehe

Chapter 12: Well i kinda expecting that. She must be dumb if she never notice that ppl around her were hiding secrets. And she ofc would be pissed off that she was the only one who didn't know why she was so guarded and controlled.

Chapter 11: It's really cute!!!! A little rushed I think, but I'm glad they made up ^_^

Chapter 11: Its cute... but don't you think its kinda rushed? Im sorry .... im not complaining seriously.. sorry again

Chapter 11: my cheeks hurt because I'm smilling so wide..haha!

Chapter 10: Baekhyun fall in love with those grumpy face! its cuteeee

Chapter 9: Ouch Baekhyun.. Feel sorry for Sera huhuhu.. I hope everyone else make Baekhyun realise that he should be with her... More updates puhleaseeee!!!

Chapter 9: happy..happy..happy..and now sad...poor Sera..huhu

Chapter 4: Baek is so sweeeeet. Oh I wanna pinch his cheek ;b

Chapter 1: hahaha, so interesting. curious how Baek will handle Sera later ;)