Chapter 6: They are so cute (^_^). Just like two little kids messing around with each other. They're so falling in love so fast that they didn't even realized it (^_^). & it's gonna make so much more of that childish insults for them to realized it.
Chapter 6: Oh my god ! That was absolutely epic !
'Puppy-dog-face' is the ultimate hidden crush insult seriously.
And the kiss, Oh My Gosh I feel personally attacked.
Are they going to be awkward after it ? Who knows.
Dang it, this was such a beautiful chapter.
Chapter 4: Hands down my new favorite otp and probably the second female character to resemble ever in my attitude, good job. Can't wait for the next update.
Chapter 1: This was a rather short chapter but that's understandable considering the fact that It's the first. I only saw one grammar mistake in this chapter as well. Though, this story already sounds interesting.
This story has really a potential! I really like the fluff!!! If you need someone to help you with the edits, I could help you with it. This is a really nice story. Good job, though! :-)
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