Chapter 5: Thank for another sweet review omg ;A; I was actually waiting for an opportunity to use Gayoon, she's so beautiful it's unfair and she has that perfect "looks like she could kill you and could probably actually kill you" look for Yoonji. Omg I'm so glad you like her personality because I really wasn't that confident about it's good to that I got her down okay. Shhht I'm not that great. Hah Anger, Spite, and Coffee are basically what keep her going xD
I, too, live for the gays man. Like seriously you give me the option to make a gay and 76% of the time I make a gay xD As for dispatch, I figured that like 6 years later and after debuting in a group that had one flopped single and then disbanded, nobody would really care about the ex-Faerietale members anymore, Dispatch has actual idols to stalk . Obviously gay bars are now out of the question xD (Yoonji y u doing this to yourself)
Dw Legally Blonde is a thing in my heart xD And omg Sophie being collatoral damage to Yeseul's antics is YAS. Anyway I'm really glad you liked her :D
Chapter 5: hi hi thanks for the review!
i was actually updating my app when u released the review page haha
anyways, all new things are in bold so i hope i've clarified everything?
and as for bomi as face, im totally okay with that
i really really ing love bomi haha
Chapter 8: finally got to reading the teasers omg
the teasers are giving me lots of insp that i kinda wished i read it before working on the app omg
and i completely forgot to add gigi into my app wtf am i doing omg
all the girls sound so different from each other
their interactions are so nice
tho im a bit curious why clara was so nervous around chase LOOL
omg 14 years tho damnnnn
n.flying's longest training member was 10 yrs and when u add up all their training time, it was 29...
theres only 4 members like danngggg
hella props to jj for being ble to be so patient, its awesome to hear that she's finally getting a chance to debut
i really really wanna know what the other members would say if they find out naeun is still so close with gigi tho
and why she's still not being honest with naeun......
anyways, the story so far sounds amazing and i'm really excited to read more!
thank you for this ^^
Congrats to the chosen gals and uijnklrefd you chose my overly dramatic diva blessssss omg
So like you wrote her really well??? Like she'd totally be that person that's like "oh? you want me to.. not be tan...? wouldn't it be such a shame... if i .... stayed out.... in the sun .... all day...." hehehehe
Naeun and Gigi still hand out though???? omg omg what even the drama it is brewing i feel it yes good!!!
Also the JUNG siblings??? Yes please I'm on board ((after all Chase's singing twin is Jessica lololol in love with her voice)) And damn, JJ trained for a long time ;;;; But I'm so happy that she's debuting now!
Dannie you're gonna do WONDERFULLY on this applyfic, everyone seems to be super hyped about it :D
Chapter 5: Woah I'm so glad you like Sophie ;A; Chungha is my bae too I'm sooo glad that she got some love halfway through and made it into the group! Her dancing is amazing and she's so beautiful (and I'm weak xD ). Yeah she's Kiwi! I don't see very many New Zealanders around here so I thought it'd be cool to go with that for once. Aaah so happy you like her personality, I always try to see the good and the bad in traits since they're rarely just positive or negative and I'm especially proud of her :D
Ah crap I forgot to put the meeting in the normal BG, that's fixed now so it'll be a little easier to understand. Also I didn't very clearly but with the 2 years I meant there was 1 year where she was just living with her parents and then 1 year at Cube and then she fled back to New Zealand. I fixed that too to be more clear (that's what happens when you hand it in at 3 in the morning xD ). #BIPRIDEYO!! And yeah I figured Sophie and Jinsol def would not get along right off the bat, but who knows that's what character development is for *o* Ugh Yura is so beautiful like how dare and yassss I am totally here for flirtation xD And I'm not saying that the #toohotforthisworld squad is based on my own opinions buuuuut..... Also what are you talking about she's not jealous of Joy nope that's preposterous you take that back.
Yook Sungjae is the WORST CHOICE OMG SOPHIE WHY. I love that little . I love that whole group full of s honestly but I swear Sungjae is the tiest <3 DUDE I'LL TOTALLY BE YOUR FRIEND. Anyone who comes up with something as golden as 'down under blunter' is #friendgoals omg I laughed so much it's PERF.
Chapter 5: congratz to everyone so far!!
MYUNGSOO X NAEUN THO MY OTP
well one of em anyways LOL.
ahemm anyways, i'll be back with a legit comment for the chapters soon!
and omg why so many awesome apps for thumbelina all of a sudden otl
probs gunna apply for little red now LMAOO
Chapter 8: Congrats to everyone that's been chosen so far!
Dani, I'm so glad that you're starting this applyfic! Your writing is ON POINT & I'm so excited to read about all the members as well as the entire group once the story officially begins! 화이팅!
You wrote JJ well & I'm glad that you emphasized that she was nervous to debut after spending such a long time as a trainee! I like her little message to her sister at the end as well! I can't wait to see more of the Jung sister interactions!
Hm... I think that maybe you could write the characters that don't get applicants as OCs? I mean, that's a lot of work, but I'm sure you could do it! Plus, then you don't have to adjust anything!
If you don't want to make them into OCs, then I'd suggest just adjusting the story to cut out the plotlines ^^;
I'm excited for the story to begin! I'm glad that you're starting it up! :D
Chapter 5: Hey so thanks for being alive! I'm actually going to redo the app itself since this was One of my first and I actually had no clue what to do! I should be done in the next few days~
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