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spontaneity
#1
Chapter 14: THE GIRLS ARE SO ING CUTE HOLY HELL
sophie is a burst of energy omg LOL
she is literally me when i watch movies so i can understand that part so well
idk how people stay still tbh cause i can't even last two seconds omg

clara sounds so cute and precious omfg
all the girls gotta protect her!!!
kinda worried for her tho cause wouldn't any type of bashing small or big impact the girl a lot?
like i dont wanna read about clara breaking down, she still sounds like just a child and everything

ahh jj she's so motherly LOOL
its a nice difference from the clara and sophie even tho all three are completely different in their own right
if jj gets into acting as well she's going to be more than just a triple threat
she gunna outright be an all rounder! that'd be amazing tbh

its okay with the slow updates cause the main part is that you do haha
you've already written more chapters than basically 4/5 of the applyfics on this site!
i'm so excited to read about their debut stage KJANSDKJANS
i kinda want them to stutter and be an awkward mess LMAO
it'll become a fond memory once they get used to it

(like exo tbh LMAO)

and omg variety shows
RUNNING MAN
WEEKLY IDOL
DREAM TEAM
thats all i got in mind rn haha will def add to this when i remember more!
thank you for all the effort you've put into this story! <3
WhenWeLove #2
Chapter 14: These chapters have been so good. I like that the group is trying to talk about their problems and help each other get through them. It seems like good start for them since they are bound to encounter even more drama as they go on. It also has me thinking about them interacting with other idols. That would be interesting to see when they get to it. I'm excited to see all of the idol relationships we have going on here (especially Clara's). Also, don't worry too much about updates. They've been pretty fast in my opinion. They shouldn't stress you out too much. We want it to be fun for you too and not a mess of stress. Hope you're doing well.
UrangUtang
#3
Chapter 14: Dude don't even worry about your updates, for one you're a really regular and fast updater, and also your personal life is more important than how regular you update and the chapters are so good the wait is always so worth it <3

This was another beautiful and so emotional chapter woah, you're so good are writing this interactions and really making us feel the hopes and dreams and fears of these girls. It's also really nice as are reader, especially because I'm the kind of reader who doesn't want to stalk apps, I'll find out what they're like through your writing, and damn girl you're not disappointing.

And that blanket fort! I'm jealous of their blanket fort I want one xD and Jinsol is suuuuch a cutie like omg can she get any sweeter? What an actual sweetheart. And JJ is a good unnecessary keeping then together which can be easier cause one is a wee babu and the other is... well Sophie xD ach seriously your writing is goals.

As for the show case honestly I don't really have any requests, I'm gonna love what you write whatever it is so just write what's fun for you is my request :D
smile_for_roo
#4
Chapter 14: u HM BYE YOU MAKE ME SO MAD WITH YOUR WRITING.
You did so well with these two chapters, especially with the emotion and the rawness, as well as the relationships with the girls! I also commend you for writing NINE characters so well, and soon to be more with love interests/rivals/guest appearances/Gigi, I'm sure!!
freaking Chase and Sophie #ishipthis #relationshipgoalstbh

I'm beyond excited for this showcase, uhm, maybe a segment for the famous people that are either friends/siblings of the girls who show up to support/ get called in without them knowing??? I know if Min Yoongi shows up Chase would be like "...yo you actually got out of bed for this i'm hoNORED DANG" lmao but yeah :D Sooooo good so far, I'm really happy that you're not giving up on this ~
spontaneity
#5
Chapter 13: Oh god this chapter was so emotional
You fleshed out the girls' feelings and stress so well in this chapter making it really easy to sympathize and understand them

I especially agree the part where someone said its not really fair for the girls to have to endure all this extra to become an idol
I mean trainee period and idol life is hard as it being under the worlds scrutiny and everything

I feel bad for Naeun tho
Gigi was her childhood best friend so it's obvious that it'll be hard for her to let the friendship go tho

im interested in knowing how sangmi and Naeun would get on better terms

i wonder if chase feels offended whenever she's called orange? Like even tho the girls are close

Like the case with Kai and N they are close with the group members but they still don't like being called dark or black
MingyuCarat
#6
Chapter 13: I dont know why but I began to cry a bit.. Their stories and frustrations was really something I could feel.. I swear its going to be hard for the girls
UrangUtang
#7
Chapter 13: This was such a fantastic and raw chapter, wow. I do think it was really good to have it now because it set the mood and shows us exactly what these girls are dealing with. It gives us a better understanding of all of their thought and fears and wow did it deliver. Once again I am incredibly impressed with your writing. I especially feel for Xingyi, depression is a terrible beast to struggle with and I'm glad she was able to let some emotions in and out here. I also feel Tina's frustrations about everyone's fixation on her beauty and Sangmi's pent-up resentment about the whole leader things. They've all gone through so much together, and poor Su-Chin who feels responsible for it all ;A; So many emotions in this chapter and it was a really good read. I can't wait for more~
UrangUtang
#8
Chapter 9: Ah sorry for the late reply I was abroad all last week! Agh your writing is so good how dare ;A; I'm really, really enjoying your writing style, especially interactions which is something I always struggle with so dude respect you're so god at this. Also thank you for choosing Sophie (though lbr she had no competition xD) and her getting mopey about WGM is just perfect omg. And her and Jinsol bonding, you're gonna regret picking Paranormal Activity omg poor things xD

Omg Tina and Hakyeon are adorable ;A; Ravi stop making fun of the guy hahahaha. Oh man I do look forward to more about them. What a lucky (or unlucky?) choice of MCs there xD

Suchin is such a sweetheart, what a lovely manager. I love how she refers to them by their real names instead of their stagenames, that's a nice bit of personal touch. And man they really /are/ a multicultural bunch aren't they xD I do wonder who the new leader will be, and I do feel bad for Sangmi about the whole thing. I suppose we'll find out soon and I'm so here for it! :D Super excited for this story omg~
You-gave-us-a-galaxy
#9
Wow! I'm so pumped that the story is actually starting! :D I can't wait to read about the 1st stage! & Tina is going to be hosting!

You could make a Wikipedia page for GiGi kind of how you did for 4xU/Faerietale as a group (so the you wouldn't need to include things like trivia or personality traits.

I'm totally down with having some Soompi articles to announce things! I feel the same way as Viv ^^

Regarding the leader business, maybe Sang Mi could be the leader of the original members & the group as a whole (like Suho in EXO & EXO-K) & JJ could be the leader of the new members & Sang Mi's co-leader (like how Kris was in EXO & EXO-M) since they're a larger group.
spontaneity
#10
THEIR FIRST STAGE IS COMINGGGGGGGGG
"next week on mcountdown" so does that mean next week in real time LOL

and info on gigi would def be great! or you can like reveal bits and bits of it as the story progresses
unless gigi wouldn't be showing up anymore? which i kinda doubt haha

oh and regarding your update note, soompi articles are completely fine haha
i think it'd be more interesting to read about it through the news thing first and then see how everyone reacts?
and like did they know beforehand (if its dating scandal), or their reaction to the comments, etc

either way, i'm cool with whatever you've got in mind for this ^^
smile_for_roo
#11
Yooooooo bro the tension is LIT and I'm on edge bc you lEFT US WITH A CLIFFHANGER Y U DO THAT.
Anyways, m!countdown is happenin' and there looks like so much is going to be written and done like damn son u go I barely have time to breathe lol
((I am also for the Gigi app to at least be clear of her standings? I'm a little curious of her accomplishments since she's been like, on the map for years it seems and I'm wondering how her success was with the whole scanda issue))
WhenWeLove #12
Chapter 11: Oh my, thank you very much for choosing Sang Mi. I like how all of the girls have distinct personalities. There's also some of their back stories in there which I like. It usually takes a long time to get into them. I'm excited to know more about the girls. The article comments are pretty funny even if they might be fairly accurate. That's all I can think of for now. I look forward to the next chapter.
spontaneity
#13
Chapter 11: gahhhhhhh thank you so much for choosing xingyi!!!!!!
i haven't been much for girlgroup applyfics honestly
but i really liked the idea of this and i'm sure the story is going to be awesome
so im even more hyped hehe

even im curious to know what is going on with xingyi atm LOL
and the way su-chin basically babies her otl
really excited to read more of their interactions tbh haha

eeeeeeps that tension when the leader talk was brought up tho
i wonder who the leader would be! what if its someone who wasn't even someone who really thought about the position LOL
like someone other than jj and sangmi! it's not likely but just wondering haha
atm i feel like sangmi should be the leader tbh
i mean she was originally supposed to be the leader
jj could be the second in command

ahh you've got so much planned for the story, im really excited to see how it progresses and everything!!
good luck ^^
and once agian, thanks for choosing xingyi! :D
MingyuCarat
#14
Chapter 10: I can't wait ^^ congrats to the chosen one ^^ and the one who have been a fan of naeun; don't worry she'll love her fans and that her members get a lot of fans too
spontaneity
#15
Chapter 9: omg chase is such a ball of sunshine LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
she's everywhere omg i love it

awwwwwwwwwwwww tina and n holy
i wonder how their mcing experience together would go!!!
and if their dating is going to maintain a secret
all the drama if it were revealed to the public omg

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
i'm so sorry but sophie's part had me cracking up
so sungjae is just a friend?
but then why is she so jealous............
or does she like sungjae?
and does sungjae know????
im so tempted to read the apps
but i wanna read it from the story more ahh
the dilemma lOOOl

ANYWAYS CONGRATZ TO SOPHIE AND TINA!!!
JUST ONE MORE REVEAL LEFT RIGHT?! SO EXCITEDDDDD