How does this look?

I made this how does it look? BE HONEST EVEN IF MEAN COMMENTS I WILL ACCEPT THEM

 

      

WHAT ABOUT THIS ONE? IT TOOK ME FOREVER ON THE FONT, BUT THE PICTURE WONT BE GOOD I  THINK~! ^^ 

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Rai_Moore
#1
You need ti work on more professional fonts. It'll look better with fonts that fit the story. Good job for a beginner.
-Luhun
#2
if its bad yea i get it **