Did I lose my moxy?

Okay, so... I've finally had the time to sit down and start writing the story that has been running in my head since I had a dream. And uhm... yeah, I kind of just need feedback on whether or not I have completely lost the ability to write, since it's been a gazilion years since I last wrote anything... So...  here goes:

 

 

The noise of the arrival hall was almost too much for Kyuhyun’s ears. He looked around at the unfamiliar faces in confusion, trying to spot the one he knew. The sound of his name cut through the loud voices flooding his ears from all around him, and he snapped his head towards the source, lips splitting in a tired smile when he finally saw the well known face of his long-time friend.

 

“Mimi!” he called, weaving through the crowds as best as he could with his luggage on tow. Once he finally reached the taller male he let go of his trolley to wrap both arms around the other. “I missed you,” he mumbled into Zhoumi’s shoulder, hugging him close and inhaling the familiar scent of his friend.

 

Zhoumi hugged him equally close, letting Kyuhyun cling to him as much as he wanted to. “I missed you too, Kyu,” he replied with a soft smile as the younger pulled away and looked up at him. “You look...”

 

“Like a skeleton, I know,” Kyuhyun finished, a humourless smile pulling up his lips and making his cheek bones even more prominent. “I was hoping you could, you know...” he trailed off, awkwardly looking down at the floor while making a gesture towards his face.

 

“Of course,” Zhoumi agreed immediately, reaching out and giving Kyuhyun’s shoulder a reassuring squeeze. It almost felt as if there was nothing but Kyuhyun’s shirt between the bones of his shoulder and Zhoumi’s hand. “Let’s get going. We’ll have to stop by my place then, but that’s okay, we can put your luggage there as well. Sungmin said they’d be in the wedding hall at three, so we have good time,” he told the younger as he took his luggage. He didn’t ask and Kyuhyun didn’t comment as they made their way through the many people happily reuniting with loved ones.

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ryeowookisperfect621
#1
definitley not, trust me if i could write that well i'd be the happiest person ever lol XD but i like this, i mean, even though it's short, it's well written and even someone who had never read any of your stories would say you are talented just by reading this ^^ (did that even make sense? i'm too tired haha) BTW are you planning to go to SS6 if they come to Europe? ^^
UndeadVampire
#2
It's so good that it's sad..... aww
bookworm83197 #3
;w; brb crying
(Why did you write that OTL Poor Kyunnie)
XD I don't think there's anything wrong with your writing if that's my gut reaction. :P I think your mojo's still going strong! ^_^
truthserum #4
I don't think you lost it. It's interesting.
pilikpoplove #5
It sounds pretty interesting, i don't think you have lost your mojo you need to get back on track that's all.
mischievous_akmood
#6
this is just my opinion, but is this somehow related to Sungmin's wedding?
and I thought this was really good for a drabble XD