Title10/10

does it hook me in from the beginning, or make me inwardly groan? Your title shouldn't be too revealing or cliche, and should really be well thought, I believe. Your title is the first thing people see.

Description/Foreword-10/10

your description should describe without telling too much, and your foreword shouldn't give too much away, either. Lead the readers in!

Flow-20/20

This means that your story isn't rushed or its dragging. Just be careful, many authors, including myself sometimes get so anxious that we get caught up in telling the big juicy stuff. Remember; YOUR AUDIENCE DOESNT KNOW THE BIG JUICY STUFF TO COME!!! Lead them into it, without trying so hard that they skip a chapter just to get the story going. 

Spelling, Grammar, Etc.-20/20

Do you really want a story with bad, stupid keyboard errors? Read before you post to make sure your chapters are perfect, okay? And really think about two people talking when it comes to grammar, would they actually sound like that in a true conversation?

Plot-20/20

What makes your story so good? Really think about what you're writing and plan it out!! It's a story, make it good!!!

Characterization-15/15

make sure your characters are well developed and really show the emotions and actions they would do as that character. Don't just base it off of "everyone knows how Jiyong acts so I don't really need to worry" because some might not. Characterization is truly important in a story. 

Personal Enjoyment-5/5

hey, did I like it?