BB Review

Criticism Level: 10+

Title: 3/5
It doesn't reveal too much but I think it reveals a little too little. It's eye-catching but if you hadn't requested, I would've passed right by it. It's relevant all right. Baby blues mean a woman having depression after giving birth and the story is about a girl getting pregnant unnecessarily. It's not really unique, it's common actually. I have ran across titles like this.

Description & Foreword: 9/10
It's relevant to the story and the description pulls the reader in. The character guide is a spoiler though so enlarge/color the *SPOILER ALERT* above the guide. The description is unique though.

Characters: 18/20
Their reactions are believable. It's portrayed orignally but most of it is expected. Like, Kyungsoo being gay and married with her homeroom teacher was something I didn't expect. I've only seen positive points and I haven't really seen negative points because there's only nine chapters.

Plot: 19/20
The plot is realistic. A pregnant girl going to be a teen mom, parents don't approve of her being a teen mom so they disown her, "mate" doesn't want to take responsibility for his actions, and she's alone until she meets better people. Something that could happen to anyone. It's a common story plot that I have read before but the author adds little unexpected events in the story like Kyungsoo being gay and married to her homeroom teacher, Jongin. I haven't really seen much themes, it's a little angsty at points and seems themeless for the first nine chapters.

Flow: 5/5
It's consistent and it flows nicely. The author doesn't switch the POVs often so it's less confusing for the readers.

Grammar & Vocabulary: 14/15
There are a few spelling mistakes but I didn't really see any eye popping mistakes. Vocabulary, maybe you could use bigger words instead of sticking to common words. Use adjectives and verbs to describe. Check Foreword for Park Chanyeol, his name is spelled wrong btw.

Description & Emotions: 7/10
I'm not sure if it's supposed to be angst or comedy or even romance. It's themeless (?).

Format (Graphics & Layout): 10/10
You could make the font size a bit bigger for the readers. The graphic fits well with the story because you can't really express baby blues in a graphic so it's mainly blue which I thought was funny.

Overall Enjoyment: 4/5
I didn't feel much emotion but I enjoyed reading it. It's not exactly my preference but it was fun to read.

Total: 89/100 //B (+)
Thank you so much for requesting~

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