Hey guys! I just want to know what you think of my writing. Take note I'm only in high school and I'm desperately trying to make time so my updates are not as consistent anymore! I'm sorry~ 

I tend to take criticism really harshly. And I'm only asking to be shot down right now, but I want your opinions. Just try not to kill me ㅠㅠ... Thanks(: ㄱㅁ