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Well this is a nice thing. Again, I'm so sorry for not posting The Return of The Galaxy Chapter 1 today. 

Laziness got in the way and I figured, I need to proof read it a lot. Bear with me, this is my first time writing a (semi-)serious fanfiction. The last time I did was way back when I was a weeaboo. I would write boss drama and emoticons on the side. I swear to god, they were heavenly. Here, have a small clip from one of my earliest fic:

One day,There were two daughters of aristocrats named Y and X.

While playing near the riverside, A tree fell as a lumberjack cut it with a RELLEH BIG CHAINSAW!

So X had an idea! So she asked the lumberjack if she can borrow a piece of trunk...And the Lumberjack shooked his head... after lots of pleases.. she bribed the person and hand a piece of the trunk and after a half hours she built a floating raft fer the river (which is not deep). The three of them (Lumberjack,X,Y) pushed the piece of dirt and made a big splash on the river.. So Y and X hopped aboard the raft as the Lumberjack waved goodbye with his white hankerchief.

3 hours passed and Y and X were still on the raft and their parents looking for them.

So X's Mom was like (@_@)......(She fainted after the story that the Lumberjack told her)

And Y's Father was like o(>_>)?? (As if he forgot his own daughter..)

half an hour later... the raft came back to the riverside and The two saw their parents and guards looking for them..

 

Beautiful. I was a literary genius from the start. 

 

So, yeah. Bear with me. It's gonna start kinda fast but I will try to improve my writing through the chapters. 

 

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