Midnight Assistant

Hey guys, so I'm writing this to ask your opinions on the story. So I'm thinking of adding another character and another plot twist, but I'm kind of scared it might be to much. Well actually the new character isn't that new I brought him up in the story before. And for this plot twist I need HIM. As far as the twist it's a secret that neither of the two know and I will most likely reveal it in the next four or five chapters (not counting bonus).

Anyway I want the readers opinions since I partly write it for your enjoyment.

Do you think it would be to much to add another hurdle for the two to face? Especially since they have the clan to worry about as well as her family /company (just told to much).

I mean this new twist won't be that challenging or hard but it will cause alot of confusion and problems. And dare I say it...death for a choice few.(definitely said to much)

Please give me your opinion, cause I'm truly stuck. I don't want this to end up like other stories that were good until they threw more into the pot.

Thank you for your time and comments. Love you all.😚😚

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iamanadea #1 Aug 21, 2014 06:44:46

I think its okay to add another character authornim especially if you think that his role will be a big part of other characters life. I'm excited to have their wedding soon.. ahahahahahha

FrenchKijibe #2 Aug 20, 2014 06:18:19

judging from how strongly defined are your characters (mostly because of the way you describe their traits and the way you made them interact ) you should definelty go ahead because even it'll be frustrating for the readers to see confusion and problems it'll be still very very coherent. I always loved your characters for their coherency, even when it has suspense, cliffhangers and twists after seeing the outcome I'm always like "this is so him" "this is so her" , I know that no matter what happens Jiyong will still be this hot blood dragon that doesn't control his burst of anger but is confident enough to put aside his pride when needed (especially for his woman) and Chaerin this strong and independent woman, not fainted hearted and cursing to whom needs to hear and always there for her beloved ones…
thus beside the characters you just have a talent for plots anyway so please go ahead curiosity got the best of me !

BeVictorious #3 Aug 20, 2014 04:49:46

I think you should go ahead and add your twist but it really depends on how you write it. I've read some stories where the twist killed it and left the reader and probably the author (since they havent updated since) floundering and wondering where to go from there. This doesnt seem to be the case here. Your twist does not detract from the story, it does not digress from the path you have mapped out, only adds more hurdles along the way and hurdles build character, they reveal more of a situation and expose us to things we otherewise might not be aware of. I'm conflicted in wondering if it would be too much, clearly Chae and Ji have a lot to face, adding more to their plate seems cruel but if it would build them up for a better tomorrow them I'm all for it.
Saw this on my tl but since chaerish had already replied and everything she said was so on point I didnt feel the need to reply again.
I think you should add your twist, it seemed plausible to you for a reason and I dont think it will affect the story adversely. We are all expecting something big anyways with plenty of casualties, odds are if you hadnt outrightly pointed it out, we would accept the twist as another stepping stone to the conclusion of the story. It is afterall the nature of epic stories and I see yours as one.
You've got me all kinds of curious now and my imagination has gone into overdrive. Its a good thing I wanna read this again, I'll be on the lookout for any character that might be the one you are referring to.
Anyways, please go ahead and add your twist, its your story and no one can write it better than you. You know whats best for it. Seriously looking forward to it. Still my fave story right now.