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❝ FIlles de fleur

Life were never to turn normal again once she stepped they stepped their feet inside the small flower shop. Both male had their eyes on them and soon they never let them out of their gaze. Little did they know, that these girls were carrying secrets darker than the darkness itself. Little did the males know, that they soon would be dragged into a whole new life. And sacrifice a lot more than they ever thought.

And soon they would have to face their biggest sacrifice ever.

What is worth to risk?

It would actually be nice to get your opinions on this.

I wanna discuss my ideas with someone.

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--daedreamer #1 Jul 20, 2014 05:45:59

i think this sounds really interesting! is this like, a story idea you're thinking of posting? first of all, i like that they meet in a flower shop; the serenity of the shop juxtaposes well with the darkness that they face there, and i feel like it could have a much deeper meaning. also, i like how the guys like try to trap the girls in their gaze, and they think they're in control, but all of a sudden the tables flip and these girls are not so innocent, and, by the way you wrote it, it seems like they're the ones pulling the strings, and the guys are the ones who are trapped. i can't tell too much by what you've written so far as it's quite short and doesn't really go in depth with anything, but overall i think it's a great idea that you could go very far with :)