Equinoxium (Lay & Hana story): Post or Not?

Hello everyone! So, yes, as the title says, I have made a story about Lay and an OC girl. It's not all about fluff though. I wanted to try the romance genre, and after reading a lot of romance fics here, I do admit I want to try writing it. It'll help me explore different genres, and maybe I could develop my skills there ^^ So, the story is still saved as a document in my computer, but I'm already working on the third chapter. It is entitled Equinoxium. What is Equinoxium? Well, it basically means that day and night are equal at equal times. 

So~ It does sound weird, right? ^^; But I'll post it if you guys want to read it. If not, I'll further work on it and I'll see what will happen to it. 

So, to post or not to post? Please comment below ^^

Excerpt from Chapter 2:

Lazy .
 

"Excuse me?" 
 

Hana's head whipped up so fast, it made a crack that only she could hear. Hana tried to find her words as she stared deeply into the boy's eyes.
 

"W-What?" Hana asked, mentally cursing herself for sounding dumb. Fantastic, he's going to kill you now! Goodbye mom and Sarang, and to that piece of that keeps barking outside our house-
 

"I specifically heard you call me a trifling imbecile."
 

Hana blinked at the words he used. Rich kid, she guessed in her mind. She was dumbfounded for a few minutes before she realized that the mysterious boy had his chin resting on the palm of his hand and his elbow on the table, waiting for her reply.
 

"O-Oh!" It was like the light bulb of ingenuity flickered in her mind, "You're not the lazy - Obviously not, I just met you. I called the cashier over there a lazy since he really is one. You should see him when it's rush hour here; he flirts with the ladies and basically sleeps on the job. Although I do read that people who have jobs in China are permitted to take a nap because it boosts their work efficiency but guess what, we're not China. So technically, Kai is a lazy-"

 

AND DONE! :D 

 

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sweetpau15
#1
you should definitely post it!!!!!
it seems so interesting!!!
and i miss reading Lay fics ^_^
Shereen_JiaYi #2
It seems interesting . Looking forward to your new story XDDD
allorysayshi
#3
POST POST POSTTTT, please :3 it sounds interesting.
kpop-maniac
#4
post it so that I can read it! <3
animeotakupooh
#5
The excerpt was interesting and I really like your writing so I would vote for yes. Please do post it ^_^
enterawsomename
#6
wow it sounds so interesting. Post it :D
amn101 #7
post it! :D
Kryptonite_6190 #8
It sounds interesting! I would read it :3