Well, I just want to ask for an opinion about this story. I'm actually planning to write a boy to boy KyuMin fanfic...well, it still has a gender bender...a little I think. I just want to learn how to write a fanfic bwahahahaha XDD...that's my weakness. I don't know how to write that kind of fanfic because I always imagine Sungmin or Ryeowook as a girl and not as a boy. I don't know why....so weird kkkk XDD

YOU WHO CAME FROM HEAVEN

Title: You Who Came From Heaven

Pairing: KyuMin, Kyutoria, Haehyuk

Other Characters: Leeteuk, Kangin

Genre: , Gender bender, Romance

Rating: PG-13

Summary: Vincent Lee is dead, but he doesn’t know how he died. He can’t even remember who he is and where he came from. The only thing that he can remember is a gorgeous angel calling him ‘Pink Prince’ and the mission given to him—to become the guardian angel of a man named Cho Kyuhyun.

Disclaimer: I only own the plot

Foreword:

“Hi, are you awake now?”

Vincent stares at the gorgeous man staring at him. He was waving his hand happily in front of Vincent while smiling so bright. Vincent notices the gorgeous man’s cute little dimples.

“Who are you?”

Vincent asks. He has a hard time opening his eyes because of the lights that are shining so bright, making him blind.

"Oh! Sorry about that”

Vincent was shock when golden wings suddenly appear at the back of the gorgeous man, protecting him from the blinding lights that really shines so bright.

“Who are you? I mean, what are you? Where am I?”

Vincent eyes as his eyes grow big. He quickly gets up, making his head ache so badly.

“Ouch! What is happening to me?”

Vincent asks as he holds his head. The gorgeous man holds him.

“Don’t move. You’re not yet fine. You supposed to lie down”

The gorgeous man told Vincent, trying his best to laid him back on the fluffy cloud.

“Let me go”

Vincent pushes the gorgeous man away from him.

“Calm down Pink Prince”

The gorgeous man told Vincent. He blows golden dust on Vincent, taking his pain away. Vincent was shock when the pain that he’s feeling in his head suddenly disappears. He looks at the gorgeous man, feeling scared of him.

“Don’t be scared of me Pink Prince”

The gorgeous man told Vincent. He cups Vincent’s gorgeous face and smiles at him.

“I won’t hurt you”

“Who are you?”

Vincent asks as he roams his eyes around. He feels confused as to where he is. The place is really bright and peaceful and he can see people with wings. Everyone is happy and it’s like a paradise and it seems that he’s in heaven.

“Where am I?”

Vincent asks as he continues roaming his eyes around, still wondering where he is. The gorgeous man wearing white clothes with golden wings smiles at him. He holds Vincent’s gorgeous face between his hands, forcing him to look at him.

“You’re in heaven and I’m the head of the angels. I’m Angel Teukie”

The gorgeous man introduces his self with a sweet smile on his lips. Vincent’s eyes widened because he can’t believe what he just heard.

“You’re a what?”

Vincent asks.

“Angel”

“And I’m in heaven?”

Teukie nods happily as an answer.

“But why? I didn’t remember myself dying. Actually…”

Vincent stares at Teukie who is smiling at him.

“Actually what?”

Teukie asks. Vincent holds his head and stares at the angel in front of him, feeling lost and confused.

“Actually…I don’t know anything. I can’t remember anything. Who am I? Why I’m here?”

Vincent asks with great confusion in his voice.

“You’re Pink Prince”

“Pink Prince? What kind of name is that?”

Vincent asks. Teukie shook her head.

“Hmmmm…I don’t know honey. That’s how I heard it. They are calling you Pink Prince”

Teukie told Vincent.

“They? Who are they?”

Vincent asks, trying to remember what really happen to him and how did he end up dying and who is him…the real him. But he really can’t remember anything. Not even a single detail about him.

“They…I don’t know, but they are they”

Teukie told Vincent.

“Then why I’m here?”

Vincent asks.

“Simple”

Teukie smiles sweetly.

“That’s because you already die”

“DIE? SINCE WHEN DID I DIE?”

Vincent shouts with wide eyes open. He can’t believe that he’s already death because he doesn’t remember himself dying.

“You’re just kidding, right? I’m not death. I mean…I don’t remember myself dying”

Vincent told Teukie with fear in his voice. He starts pulling his hair just like a crazy boy because he still thinks that Teukie is just joking around.

“No…”

Vincent shook his head with confused expression.

“I’m not death. I can’t die. Why?”

“Why?”

“Why did I die? What happen to me? How come I can’t remember anything? Tell me”

Vincent told Teukie who just shook his head.

“Please…”

Vincent holds Teukie’s hands.

“Please send me back on earth. I don’t belong here because I’m not yet dead”

“I’m sorry…”

Teukie sighs.

“But you just died awhile ago. Ah…four in the morning to be exact”

“What happen to me? Please help me remember. You need to bring me back to earth. I can’t be here. I just can’t”

Vincent told Teukie, still can’t believe that he’s already dead. Teukie sighs.

“Actually….”

Teukie smiles at Vincent.

“I received an order coming from God earlier before your soul arrives here. He told me to send you back on earth”

“I can live again? I told you. I’m not yet dead”

Vincent told Teukie happily. Teukie shook his head.

“You’re really dead ok. It’s just that you’re not yet ready to die and that’s why God wants to give you a chance to go back on earth. He told me to give you a very important mission and that is to become a guardian angel”

“Guardian angel?”

Vincent asks. Teukie nods happily.

“Come. I’ll show you something”

Teukie holds Vincent’s hands as they stand up together. He walks towards the golden basin under the big olive tree. Teukie touches the water on the golden basin. Vincent’s eyes widened when something appeared on it. He can see a man sitting in a very crowded place, drinking something. He seems to be tipsy and it seems that he’s carrying the problems of the world.

“Wow! The golden basin turns out to be a television. How cool is that?”

Vincent told Teukie, feeling really amazed.

“See that man?”

Teukie asks, pointing his finger on the man drinking inside a bar. Vincent nods.

“You will be his guardian angel. Now, your mission is to guard him and help him find true love. You need to help him find his happiness. I want you to look after him ok”

Teukie told Vincent who shook his head.

“Why do I need to become a babysitter?”

Vincent asks while pouting cutely. Teukie sighs.

“You’re not a babysitter ok. You’re a guardian angel”

“That’s still the same because I’m going to take care of him”

“It’s different ok. You see a babysitter is just a caretaker, but a guardian angel is a caretaker and adviser. You’re going to help him solve his problem”

Teukie told Vincent.

“But how about me? How am I supposed to solve my own problem? I don’t even know who I am and why I die”

Vincent told Teukie while frowning at him.

“That man will help you discover who you are and how you die. God is giving you a chance to return on earth as his guardian angel for you to be able to discover who you are and the reason of your death. When you finally found out about it and when you finally help him find his true love, then it’s the only time for you to be able to enter the heaven with all your heart and soul”

Teukie told Vincent, explaining his mission to him. Teukie snaps his hand. Vincent jumps when a big hour glass suddenly appears out of nowhere.

“Wow! How did you do that?”

Vincent asks like a five year old kid being amazed while watching a magic show.

“That’s because I’m an angel and I have a power”

Teukie informs Vincent, flashing a proud smile.

“You see. You also have a power like me because you’re also an angel like me”

“Really?”

Teukie nods happily. Vincent stares at Teukie, flashing his puppy eyes.

“How do I use it?”

Vincent asks excitedly. Teukie laughs softly and shook his head.

“I can’t tell you. You need to discover it by yourself”

“Yah! That was unfair”

Vincent told Teukie as he frowns at him.

“You need to go down on earth now. Remember, the time running”

Teukie told Vincent as he points his finger on the big hour glass that is flying up on the air.

“The time will start running once you arrive on earth. You need to discover who you are and how you die just before the time runs out and of course you need to accomplish your mission before the time runs out or else….”

“What?”

Teukie stares at Vincent sadly.

“She won’t wake up”

“Who?”

“She…you’ll know it soon”

Teukie told Vincent. He places his hand on Vincent’s cheek and gently caresses it.

“You need to go now. See you when I see you. You need be successful ok. His name is Cho Kyuhyun”

Teukie smiles at Vincent.

“Have fun on earth and be careful. See you later Pink Prince”

Teukie told Vincent. He smiles at him and gently pushes Vincent.

“AHHHHHHHH!!!”

Vincent shouts as he starts falling down slowly.

“You need to be successful Vincent Lee”

Teukie whispers as he watches Vincent falling slowly down on earth.

So, what do you think guys? Well, this is just a draft and I'm not yet going to post this fanfic...still thinking. Thanks a lot and I'll just update my other fanfic maybe next wekk because I'm busy being lazy and I'm thinking a lot of things. I can't even concentrate on writing because my mind is flying somewhere. Sorry for the delay updates. I hope you will all understand. Thank kyu and I love you all :)