TITLE : 10/10
It was too short but eye catching and unique! Full marks for you!

FOREWORD/DESCRIPTION : 10/10
To be honest,your description was revealing eventhough it was short and simple.And also got grammar mistakes.
 

One year after Leeteuk left for army, Kangin got into a car accident. Afraid that Leeteuk will be worried,SJ members didnt tell him about that.

Kangin was hospitalized and in a  coma  condition for 2 weeks and when he woke up, he was fine... But it seemed that he had forgotten everything about the fact that he and Leeteuk were a couple.

Waaayy more better,right?

APPEARANCE : 10/10
The poster looks amazing and really suits your theme!

GRAMMAR/VOCABULARY : 49/50
Jungsoo was quiet throughtout the car ride back to their dorm as all the members told him about important things that had happened over the two years, at the same time expressing how much they had missed him.

FLOW: 8/10
The flow was in a fine speed and not too fast.

EXCITEMENT/BONUS : 10/10
Awww,you opened my sweet memories when i was still an E.L.F .I realllllllllllyyyy ship KangTeuk and i used to write a story about them in Wattpad and LiveJournal.But then,when i didnt heard any news about Suju from my friends,i quit the fandom and joined Aff. xD
I deleted my Wattpad and LiveJournal account though .. :\
 

MARKS : 87%