STORY NAME: LOVE AND HATRED 

STORY AUTHOR:FAEYALONZO

STORY LINK:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/692264/love-and-hatred-snsd-taeyeon-exo-luhan-baekhyun-baekyeon-lutae

RUBRIC RESULTS:

TITLE:8/10

-TITLE IS EYECATCHING,HAS THIS ZING THAT MAKES THE READER WANT TO READ IT.GREAT JOB!

DESCRIPTION:6/10

-CATCHY ENOUGH TO FIRE A READER'S CURIOSITY BUT NEEDS MORE DETAILS TO ACHIEVE MAXIMUM EFFECT ON READER'S CURIOSITY.

GRAMMAR:13/15

-GRAMMAR IS GOOD.NO NEED TO WORRY.NEEDS MINOR IMPROVEMENTS,FOCUSING ON PROPER CAPITALIZATION OF "I" INSTEAD OF "i" IN REFERRING TO THE SPEAKER.

APPEARANCE:8/10

-CREATIVE USE OF WHITE SPACES,WOULD BE FAR MORE ATTRACTIVE IF YOU HAVE A SMOKIN' GOOD POSTER

IMPACT:7/10

-IMPACT WAS WEAK ON THE FIRST TWO CHAPTERS,IT WAS QUIET DURING THOSE CHAPS BUT IT HEIGHTENED ON THE THIRD CHAPTER.

PUNCTUATION:4/5

-IT WAS GREAT SINCE PROPER  PUNCTUATION MARKS WERE USED MOST OF THE TIME EXCEPT FOR SOME MISUSED MARKS.SLIGHT IMPROVEMENT WILL BE GREATLY APPRECIATED.

PLOT:17/20

-PLOT IS ADVENTUROUS AND SUITS THE TITLE VERY WELL.HOWEVER,STORY FLOW NEEDS TO BE CLEAR SINCE IT IS QUITE MESSY AND MAKE SURE TO DO TRANSITIONS QUICKLY YET SURELY SO READERS WON'T BE HAVING TROUBLE TO UNDERSTAND IT.

ORIGINALITY:20/20

-PLOT IS ORIGINAL,EXCITING AND FRESH.BRAVO!

TOTAL PERCENTILE:83! CONGRATULATIONS

EXTRA COMMENTS:

-I LOVE THE STORY FLOW!MORE UPDATES <3

-CHARACTERS ARE QUITE COMPLEX AND ITS ADDS ZING AND FIRE TO THE STORY.JUST MAKE SURE NOT TO MAKE IT TOO COMPLEX.

-STORY FLOW IS NICE,BUT MAKE SURE TO BE CLEAR.

-HYUNA'S A .THAT GREAT.BUT ALSO MAKE THE IDOLS HAVE THEIR ORIGINAL ATTRIBUTES(I.E. JESSICA BEING COLD ET.AL)

THAT'S ALL :) HOPE YOU LIKE IT :)

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