The person I admire most is Jeon Jungkook from a group called Bulletproof Boyscout. He is a 17 year old boy who was born in Busan and moved to Seoul with the approvememt of his parents to reach his dreams. 

        One of the reasons  i admire him is because of his smile. He has a very sweet smile that I would love to have since I rarely smile. He is not that tall, around 177cm and has a fit body caused by his dancing and working out after his schedules.

        He has a cheerful personality and is very friendly around new people. I am really fond of that personality. He is also very talkative and loud around his group of friends.

        He has a lot of interest, some of them are drawing which he is really good in and a few others. I love that he is very talented in singing, dancing and rapping. His group members called him the 'golden youngest' because of his multi-talent.

         I hope I could meet him one day and ask for his autograph to paste it in my room and admire it and remind remind myself how hard he worked to reach his dreams. I also hope that I would reach my lifetime dream which is to study hard and achieve my dreams to become a dietitian.

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I could go on and on about him but my friends kept on bugging me to help them correct their grammars... Plus the ending was kinda rushed cuz I needed to pass it up...

p/s: please correct my grammars...