Okay. I know this is stupid, but can somebody help me evaluate my story? I already sent forms for reviews but I want to see if they are okay in your eyes. Since I am new to writing stories.

Here is the link:

https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/694386/confetti-changmin-romance-tvxq-yunho

I know. It is NOT EXO. But I can't help but write the group who made KPOP worldwide. Hehe.

I would really appreciate it if you will do it. 

Thank you!