Just a thought: Give me substance (meat) to read.

It irritates me when I read a story, and for every sentence that the author wrote, they start a new paragraph.

Like this.

And this.

And also this.

It breaks my concentration on the story line.

It looks too spaced out.

And it looks as if there's no substance at all.

If it's to make your chapters appear longer, it doesn't.

I mean, whatever happened to paragraphs people?

You know, five sentences in a paragraph?

It's nice to read details you know.

I leik da dets u kno?

1 leik 2 n0 wat g01n 0n 1n da st0ry y0 

Though, I don't want to be a complete hypocrite since I don't necessarily have five sentences each time. 

I don't know.

I guess it's just how some people write, it's whatever.

As long as the story is good.

Still kind of annoys me though...

Just another rant. 

I still love you guys whoever does this though.

Just to let you know~ <3

-Much love to you all,

Keii

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Dreams_alive
#1
Hmm... Those writers need to improve their writing, and the only way to do so is to accept criticism and learn from their mistakes:)
rhenrhenn
#2
well..as long as the story is good,so the grammar,i'm okay with it..:)