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Calling !  Baeksooshi

The Storm and the Sun

Title !  

90%

The title is unique. I haven't read any stories who has a title like this.

Originality !

95%

It's unique.

The split personality thing is daebak!! You won't be able to see a story like this in your everyday Aff life. And the way how the story runs is so smooth. There are some flaws and there are times where I feel uncontented and confused but nonetheless it's amazing. I so LOVE Jessicaand Storm's character!!

I think it would be darn amazing if there would be a life-changing plot twist but it's your decision and imaginations that matters!! Keep it up author-nim!

Character Development !

87%

The character development is not going so well. There's some instances that this character is like this then the next that character is like that. I was confused on some parts but I understood them as I continue reading so it was good enough for me.

The characters would still improve right? I'll be waiting! ^^

Grammar ! 

96%

Your grammar is great. There are some tenses that does not fit the sentence but they were just minor mistakes that everybody makes so don't feel so bad about it. You can still correct them you know. ^^ Well done.

Foreword/Description !

88%

HMMM.It feels...short. It would be nicer if you added somehow, more specific details. But... It was good enough... well more than good enough for a foreword.

Overall Ratings !

B

I so love your story!!