These were some of the lines, sentences and words that I saw that need to be edited.

 bold ~ from your story      = ~  edited

my vision was becoming fade
= my vision was fading
"It's none of your buisness...actually"
= "It's none of your business...actually"
"There's NOT" He gritter
="There's NONE" He gritted
Jun's orbs dialated.
=Jun's orbs (eyes?) dilated.
the most beautifullest smile
=the most beautiful smile
"Why do you love me even when I do sinful crime?"
="Why do you still love me even when I did a sinful crime?"
He dissapeared?
=He disappeared?
''Funny, Sho..It's my brothers''
=''Funny, Sho..It's my brother's''
''Well, We got caught..'' Jun murmered.
''Well, We got caught..'' Jun murmurred.