I-I... Wrote my first ever >///

Omg, I think that it isn't a good, but the girl which I made the for liked it a lot, so I would like more opinions from you my friends T^T *and more experienced, ahem ahem*

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/641873/1/a-switch-in-time-a-black-eyes-red-heart-spin-off-oneshot--bts-bangtanboys-jungkook-suga-vbts

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Wonachan
#1
I read the first few paragraphs. Quite ok for but not my type tbh --", but don't worry, I'm very picky so that's why.