The Whisperer

Story title (4/5) : The title really connects with the story and titles like this always intrigue me so its good. The only thing is probably how it is not original but it is hard to be original this days.

Desciption/Foreword (3/5) : Your foreword page is very bland and does not really attract the attention of the readers. The description was short and simple also quite interesting but I hoped the foreword would give a little insight to the story but it doesn't. I really like it when writers use the foreword to give like spoilers of the drabble a little to invite me to read it more so maybe you could do that.

Story plot/Originality (7/10) : I find it quite good. It is really really short but you did warn us it is a drabble. I find myself wanting to read more and I feel like if you made it like chaptered it would be quite interesting. It is probably not that original but you managed to captivate me with so little words so props to you on that.

Flow (8/10) : It flowed really well and it wasn't too fast or slow. 

Grammar/spelling (9/10) : Except a few minor tense problems, your grammar and spelling is really good.

Enjoyment (8/10) : I really enjoyed it but you teased me. I really like reading it so make it longer. It is a drabble but you should really give more insights to the characters because that is how to make a good and attracting drabble.

Total : (39/50)

Would I recommend it? : If anyone is up for a short read that is quite entertaining, I think I would.