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Protecting Your Heart - MissyQ || Reviewed by: banabestfriend26

Title:   5/5 
 
It has the 'angsty' feel in it but I think these kinds of titles are used too often.

  Description/Foreword:       5/5

The description looked really really neat. You gave information about the fic and managed to keep it mysterious. And the short poem on the description was so, ugh. I love it so much, like it's not going out of my head any soon.
  
Story Plot/Originality:       9/10
I’ve read some stories like this before but the way you wrote it was really classy and it surely showed your point in the story.  

Flow:   10/10
  The flow was super neat and you wrote it in a descriptive manner so I spent the whole time thinking what SM would do when they read your story. There were no sudden change of scenes and everything was on the right pace.

Grammar/Spelling:   10/10
I didn't spot any grammar mistakes or spelling, just a little like super little typo:
Luhan noticed the way she was staring at the photo and he tried to stop recording but her couldn't – her needed this a lot.


Luhan noticed the way she was staring at the photo and he tried to stop recording but her couldn't - he needed this a lot.
  
I told you it’s a small small small typo. Please do correct me if I’m wrong.

Enjoyment:   10/10
Absolutely. I’d even blog about this if you want me to. A total must read.

Notes: First, I love your story, like seriously. I don’t like angst stories at all but yours was an exception.
Second, I added the flow because your story had it, it was long oneshot and did I mention it already? It is a great tear jerking story.

Total:   49/50