Your story is your. Yes, we appreciate people's support, and we care for people's feeling about our stories. But ourself still is the one who loves our stories the most. Give up when you still doesn't try hard enough, you'll regret. I also felt like I wanted to stop writing sometimes, but after all, I like writing and I know you too. Think carefully and do your best, dear ^^

I guess I can't force you into a decision, but I really do hope you continue! As you go on, you will eventually get better and better. It's rather difficult at first of course, because we can't all be perfect the moment we start, but you can learn to improve. You shouldn't give up just yet! Fighting!

No no don't stop writing. Many people when they start writing, they start off bad but then they improve. I read some of your stories and they have potential. Keep on improving. Or you could get a beta reader if you want to.