Hey guys ^_^ Long time no post. I need to write a short novel for actual actors to perform. I wrote a description and a short preview of what the story will be about. Can you give me some feedbacks please? I will be making it to a fanfiction later.

She suffer from amnesia. He suffer from heart problems. She's blind. He's deaf. She lives in a house deep within the woods. He lives in a big city. She never heard a single note in her life until one day...he played.

The cold wooden piano never made a sound. It was silent most of the time. Until one day he played a single note. How can a single note revive me when there is only darkness in my eyes.

HONEST FEEDBACK PLEASE. IT WILL REALLY HELP. I WILL TRY TO RECORD THE PERFORMANCE TOO ><