Would Anyone Want to Read This if Posted?

Okay, so back in December, I wrote a jongkey one shot called, "The Light of Your Smile." If you don't remember what it's about and would like to give me feedback on what I'm about to ask, click on the link. It takes place in a library if that will jog anyone's memory.

 

Well anywho, one of my college classes is a creative writing course and the big assignment for this class is a 10 paged (double spaced) short story. Everyone in the class will read it, critique it, and I shall cry over my failures from there.

 

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For this assignment, I chose to rewrite "The Light of Your Smile," and develop it more to meet the length requirement as well as edit some other things. (Who would pass up the chance to make your class read gay SHINee fanfiction? Not this girl)

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Since the original is only 4 pages and I'm spending effort on this anyways, would anyone want to read the final version? I would basically put it as another chapter instead of making a new story or deleting the original. The assignment isn't due until the beginning of November, I think the 7th or something, so it'll most likely be posted around then if you guys are interested.

There hasn't been a lot of activity on my stories or blog lately, so I don't know if people are still reading my chizz, but I didn't want to let all this effort go to waste.

So, anyone down with this? Yes? No? Does anyone still read blog posts anymore?

Well if you are reading this, I would appreciate it if you would share your opinion by leaving a comment :) Thanks guys~♥

 

Here's some jongkey as a thank you for reading my chizz:

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Oh and since we're talking jongkey, here's another fanart derp I made a couple days ago

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Love you guys~♥

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mix_me1435 #1
A little late but YES ME WANTS TO READ EETTT OTL
DanceaLittleMore
#2
Hey lookie I commented on your thingie
dpfluke #3
I would like to reasd it.
AsianKitten
#4
lol, i always write fanfics for my fiction class, i just changes the name a bit. hehe
Goddess-of-Love
#5
I will start by saying that your 'fanart derp' was amazing and adorable *-* OMG their noses and eyes ^^ You're a really good artist.

Okay, onto the point though ... I am so excited to read this renovated version of the story. I remember reading the first one as it was the first story I'd ever read by you and one of the first SHINee fan fictions I'd read on this website. I still remember how sad it made me and how much I loved it. I would adore to read it expanded upon and layered more. You should definitely post it! I can't wait till then! :]
Fankirmee
#6
I would LOVE to read it!!!

... I'm a er for stories in libraries ><
rainiedayze146
#7
YES YES YES SO MUCH YES DO IT :D I will happily read anything you choose to write!! and that jonkey fanart is glorious. GLORIOUS, I tell you. :)