I've been thinking to myself, what if I try to write in my mother language -which I honestly think myself, is so crappy- and turns out veeeeeery short and crappy. But then my friend told me it was quite good and I was like "really?" And because of this, I think writing in Indonesian is muuuuuch simpler LMAOOOO I just realized this because it's like the langauge I use to speak with my family everyday, because they can't speak English. And although my mom enrolled me in an international school, my Indonesian language used to be the best (IN PRIMARY BECAUSE RIVALS IN SECONDARY ARE LIKE HELL) /kreys/ 

I hope I can write more Indonesian stories, and try submitting it to a redaksi hihihi ^^ To all Indonesian readers out there, please check my story out and comment about my weird grammar and typos >< Bash me all you like, I seriously need help to kill the smart- girl in my class! I really hope with this I can improve in my Indonesian language and kill her (muahaha I'm so evil)

Here's the link to the story if you're interested: Melati

After writing this oneshot, I realized how easy it is to write in Indonesian language since we don't really have tenses and stuffs like that. The only hard thing from writing in Indonesian is I don't know if I should make the fanfic formal or like a teenage's life. /cries again/ And so I tried writing it like in a teenage's style but it sounds so weird and I changed it into the formal way which is like equally weird .-. But then after reading the both of them again the formal one sounds better so I decided to use that ngehehe XD. Another hard thing in writing in Indonesian is changing my vocabulary into the formal-ish way. I used to type 'tau' (which means 'knows') instead of 'tahu' (the real spelling a.k.a the formal one) however, 'tahu' is also a name of food in Indonesia /facepalm/ it's just so awkward to write 'tahu' because I tend to read it as 'tahu' instead of 'tau'. So Indonesian readers please tell me is it just me does it really sounds so weird ;-;

Also, please give me a review (if you can) about this oneshot because I'm curious about people's opinion ._. Honestly, I'm thinking that this oneshot is weird because I used alur campur (or maybe not) I HONESTLY DON'T KNOW some people can think like it's alur campur but some can also think it's alur maju (or whatever it is called I forget peaceee) so yeah ._. Gosh I don't even know how I came up with this idea and wrote such short crappy oneshot ._. Not only that, but I also feel like the flow in my oneshot is a little too fast and the pace is too hard for readers to understand. Oh cmon, my teacher limits me to 500 words in essays so I tend to rush things and duhh she doesn't care because she only checks the content and grammar, not the flow.

To be honest I at writing stories about the present. My stories is always either in a third person's POV (aaaand the worst part is I still write using past tense why oh why because my english ) or first person's POV (which is just the same, I write in past tense all the time). So after giving a try for this Indonesian oneshot I realized it is easier because I don't have to think about the tenses. We don't have tenses here, so the language is from the flow (not the pace) and typos. 

For Indonesian-English readers, can you understand my Indonesian stories, at the same time my English stories? ._. I know both are like so weird but I 'm giving it a try because I don't know in which language I am more fluent in. According to my English teacher, my grammar and stuffs are impressive. He told me that I barely make mistakes and if I do, it's all minor mistakes and doesn't distracts him from his reading. Last term on my midterms, I chose the topic about cooking and I spelled 'ingredients' wrongly twice. He said, "you're lucky because you made the mistake only twice. If it was more, I could've deducted marks from you." From the fifteen marks of language, I got thirteen (because I made three minor mistakes) and for the content, I got fourteen. He also said, "I could've given you fifteen for the content because you wrote it perfectly, but I'm afraid you'll think that your content is good enough so there is no need to study about it and you'll only focus on fixing your language." I was just 'uhmm yeah, okay' in my mind but I felt like crushing him because he deducted two marks for three minor mistakes -_-

Anyways it's already 22:17 over here and my mom would kill me if I don't sleep soon so bye guys and don't forget to bash me about that crappy oneshot o/