So I'm staring a new story and I kind of wanted to know what you guys think before I post it haha...  Here is the first couple paragraphs~Water.

That was what Luhan saw when his vision cleared. He sat up and saw the soft waves rolling up to the shore. They lost their energy by the time they reached where Luhan’s feet were; not quite reaching him but close. He saw the turquoise water pull back on the sand and bury it back into the water forever gone.

Sand.

That was what Luhan felt beneath him when he moved his fingers and toes. The yellowish brown minerals were soft and warm. Luhan took it up in the palm of his hand and watched it fall, joining the rest of the sand under it.

Salt.

That was what Luhan smelled when he look a deep breath. In and out, in and out Luhan calmly breathed. The wind blew slightly ruffling his hair. Luhan sighed in contentment until he heard footsteps behind him. Luhan slowly turned around and looked up to see a man.

Beautiful.

That was what Luhan thought when he met eyes with the man. This man had very pale skin, a huge contrast to the deep honey colored sand underneath him. He had chestnut hair and amber eyes. His nose was sharp and his moderately sized lips were drawn into a happy smile directed at Luhan.