my new story forward

hey guys it's Kpoplover35, i want to write a new story on like navtive american based type story bout Hyosungs new journey so tell me what u think ok and plz dn't dis it, its a work in progress and the only person who has seen the forward already is Kkberry so u can ask her for opinions aswell ok

*Lights and match*
Fire,
what do u think about the word fire?
when I think of fire I see power, control and liability to destroy what's in its wake
But I also see resolution; fires die, burn out or stop for ay unknown reason.
But for me it's different.
Nothing can extinguish the flame that burns inside me And that flame is,
Revenge.
Nothing can make it weaker or stronger.
Or so I thought.
*Blows out the flame

 

And i know it is a short forward but i like it so tell me what u guys think yeah, and if enough of you like it I'll give u the first chappter ok. Thank u for your time.

COMMENT, GET BACK TO ME, ENJOY :)

 

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hyeri-noms #1
ooh its good enough already, even just for a forward~! i'm interested in it already! revenge plot? sounds good to me~!
InfiniteVision
#2
aha, I think it's good!~ ^^
a native American type story? :O
lol, I never read a story like that. c:
I'll check it out once you publish it. n_n
Kkberry
#3
Hmm like it
Haha lol already read it