How Does This Sound?

 

 

If you read my other blog post, you would know that I'm working on writing a song right now. Well since I'm on vacation now I don't have my entire song with me, but I have this one part that I remember I think it sounds pretty good but I wanna know your opinions. Btw it's only the lyrics not the musical part I'm still working on it and I'll continue working on it once I get home.

 

 

 

Anyways, here's the part-

~No matter what I say

I continue to feel that way

And even if I push you away

My feelings never fade~

 

Lol I know it's such a tiny part out of a whole song but I only remember that one part. I might change a bit of the lyrics though. Btw how does that sound? Oh yeah and I wanted to know if anyone knows how to play the piano? I think I may need some help with the musical part but I probably can work on it by myself if no one can help me.

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carelesswhispers
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It sounds great ^^ and I know how to play the piano!! I may be able to help