► Money's Worth :: Review by DulceMinnie ►

Title: 10 / 10 

PERFECTLY SUITABLE FOR THE STORY :D 

Appearance: 10 / 10 

Description and Forward: 15 / 15

Very good, actually. No mistakes at all, and the description; perfect. 

Characterization: 10/10

I adore Aemi's personality, and Jongin's as well. You made sure to stick with it, having the girl feel that mix emotion. 'He's hot, but I hate him so much' kind of thing. Perfect.  

Plot: 10 / 10 

I've never read something like this before, so it's pretty original to me. 

Flow: 10 / 10

It's a oneshot, flow can be slow or rushed, but you made sure to not do that at all. It's great. 

Grammar and Spelling: 23 / 25  

I noticed you were missing words, not many but just a few. You can easily spot them if you read each chapter outloud to yourself, but besides that everything was amazingly great. Good job.

Bonus: 10 / 10 

Just wow! It was 2 AM when I read it and I couldn't stop laughing. It was amazing! I can't really find the words to explain just how great that oneshot was. You are really good. I admire you already. Great job! 

Comments: 

Keep up the good work. It was an honor to review your oneshot, and trust me I was being completely honest with this review. If it's bad, I'll be so mean you'll end up hating me because I'm an honest person, but if it's good then you just witnessed my review. Keep it up, and I'm sure you'll become one of AFF's top authors.

Score: 98 / 100 :: A