Honest Opinions - no being biased!

Take into consideration every story that I have written here, whether it be the Fade into Darkness series, my joonmir collection, one-shots, or the vague 2min and Jongkey ones that I have. I want to know which stories you feel were written the best, and I don't mean which stories had the best plot. Writing style, layout, which one looks the best, and was easiest to read. 

For my, I feel that the best written stories in terms of style and structure are (in no particular order):

1. Static

2. Don't Look Back

3. Beneath the Willow Tree

4. Random chapters from CBT

 

So, tell me what you think and please give an explanation! Also, tell me which stories you feel were written amateurly, as if I were a rookie writer with little experience. I want to fix mistakes and go back to edit a bunch of things, and of course, try new writing style. I've been on the same level for a year now, and it's time to improve!

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BigBangLoverMirai #1
On The Brink Of Insanity I think was written best. It made me feel what was happening, and I could clearly picture what was happening in my head. On The Brink Of Insanity had the power to make me re-read it over and over again, feeling the same emotions as when I had first read it. I feel the structure and style of On The Brink Of Insanity was very well made and I really liked it. I felt that you had put a lot of work in it. Most stories I've read on AsianFanFics hadn't really made me feel the way On The Brink Of Insanity did. I think you portrayed the characters and their personality's very well. I feel you made the chapters a good length and it wasn't rushed. I feel On The Brink Of Insanity was easy to read, and I really liked the layout of the story.
Ryanna #2
OTBOI and BTTB are the ones I enjoyed reading the most , it was easy for me to read and read again.
CBT is great, but I keep re-reading couple of chapters before the new chapter or else I will feel lost!
I mean CBT has the power to become more than just a fic , but one must read it in the same mode , that is for me or else I will fell distracted or not grabbing the point of where it ended before
SujuWriter #3
Whoops meant amateurly
SujuWriter #4
I really loved On The Brink of Insanity. I remember it being really visual and I could really see clearly what was happening. And the way the angst was written tugged at my heart strings. Static was also fantastic. CBT had some really good chapters but I think there were a few points where it felt like you weren't that into it. I can't really think of anything written immaturely.
blazensaddles #5
I haven't read the JoonMir stories nor the one-shots yet but once I complete FID ill read those. Otl I'm SJ biased so stories with SJ come first eue;;
But I really do like all of the FID stories. CBT....OMFG I love it. Like a lot!! It's one of the stories that I go ok AFF for lol
Your stories are like....completely different than others. There's more...dynamic events and the characters minds are just so intriguing that you really can't tell what would happen next with them because of the way they think.
Okay, like with what jilhoonsukho said: I'm not a fan of SNSD....but I like the way you made Tiffany's character and her relationship with Kibum.
And judging from other comments, OTBOI is your most famous and well written story. I do like the way that Kibum is a little duckling to Heechul. Just makes me want to pinch his cheeks otl.
Ah, and with CBT, the part of Sungmin attacking Jongjin kind of caught me off guard a bit but not so much. Only because I had thought Sungmin was well passed that mentality because of Hyuk. But of course, silly me, nothing ever truly goes away just like that.
Bonnie and Clyde I feel like its going to be a well written story, an improvement of sorts.

Okay, for armature type: I would probably say that Fish in the Sea was it. But not the entire thing. Just a few parts here and there, I know you had other stories to write when writing this one but some parts felt almost rushed. Yes, I got feelings of characters and the situations, but some just felt rushed to me.
Chococinna #6
I haven't been updated with your story collections but I've been reading your FID series and I really enjoyed On the Brink of Insanity. I felt the emotions portrayed in the story and how the characters developed well. You didn't rush anything and it flowed pretty well. Personally I don't read the pairings you write much but you were able to capture my attention with the plot and your writing style. It made male forget about the whole OTP thing and just read them because they're that good.
jilhoonsukho
#7
On the Brink of Insanity was your story that really gripped my heart the most. You made me want to hug Kibum and Heechul was really realistically well written. I also don't like SNSD cameos but you made Tiffany someone I liked even though she only appeared here and there.

Side note: can you accept my friend requests? I can't see any of your stories anymore and only some blog posts.
chikahime #8
I love all FID series.. that is like part of life now.. But i personally like 'Don't look back' because it is really easy to read not too much of complications n pretty straight forward in a sense..
PictureMeBroken
#9
I really liked On The Brink of Insanity. It had me completely captivated and I finished the whole story in one-sitting.
But I absolutely adored Beneath the Willow Tree. It was vague but detailed and it really had the feeling of insanity because of the flowy beginning to the choppy ending. So I'd have to say Beneath the Willow Tree is the one I think was best written out of your stories I've read.
Sakura19Haruno95
#10
For me, I liked on the brink of insanity the best. I guess I like it since that one was focused on both emotions for the characters and the environment surrounding the characters. Then I like Don't look back. I really liked how the characters developed through out the story.
Quesoygitana #11
Personally I enjoyed on the brink of insanity the most because the writing style was very good at being descriptive of both emotions and surroundings, it was also the perfect length and it didn't feel like it was being rushed or dragged out