So, what do you think?

So I started writing this story 2 weeks ago ^.^

im not that great at descriptions and stuff so I'm just going to post the start ^.^

 

Tell me what you think :)

 


 

Jun Kyu was putting his things down in his bag, fixing his blue hair and then he went out of the house, ready to go to school. The small road which leaded down to the mansion he lived in, were surrounded by trees. The sun shinned down between the leaves, wich formed a roof over the road. Two small birds were sitting in two of the trees, the one singing a melody, it was almost like the bird was confessing it's love to the other bird. Jun Kyu smiled and slowly walked away from the road, out to a bigger one. He looked back at his house, like he always did. Sending his mother, who still were standing in the doorframe, a big smile. She yelled happily. " Have a great day in school my son, remeber to be carefull." Kuy smiled, waving at his mom. He had never understood why she always told him to take care, but maybe it was just something mothers did? Kyu walked down the street, humming softly to himself. His eyes looking around, admiring the town. All the houses, were so different from each other, they all had a different color and they all were in different shape. Some of them almost looked like a ruin, while other looked like they had been build yesterday. Kyu smiled when he came to his favorite house on the road. It wasn't big, neither small, but just the size between that. It had a rather big garden, with so many flowers that it almost looked like a flower sea when the wind blowed. The path up to the house door, looked like a path you would find in a forest. Not like the big paths everybody walked on, no like the small paths, you only found if you went on a adventure in the forest. The house it self were pink, not a pink which screamed "i'm pink" in your eyes, no it was a light, comforting pink. Everytime Kyu looked at the house color he felt calm and happy, just everytime he walked by the house he felt like that. Everytime Kyu felt sad or had had a discussion with his dad, he usual went down the road sat down on the ground and stared at the house. After some time he would eventually calm down and go back home. Today he had no time to look at the calming house, though. 
 
He had left his house to late and had to hurry if he wouldn't be late to school. The teachers really didn't cared if he was late though. He was THE JUN KYU, son of the richest buisness man in Korea. If he was late or didn't even met up, nobody cared. Or his friend did, of course. The problem was, that he wasn't even sure the boys he called his friends was friends with him because they liked him or just because his dad had a lot of money. Sometimes he saw signs on that the last one was the correct one. Mostly when they didn't want him to came visit them at their houses. But what could he do? If he said he wouldn't befriend them anymore, he would just be alone and that... That was just even more stupid. Kyu were finally arrived at the gates into the school and he still had more than 15 minutes to get to class. In his mind he danced a victory dance. Kyu quickly got into the school building, walking with long steady steps down the hall. The students in the hall was staring at him, whispering words he couldn't hear. Some of the new first year students even looked scared of him. It had also been like this last year, even when they came back from a holiday it was like that. Everybody would stare at him, whispering about him and his father, the first year students would look scared and holding on to each other. He had never understood that. Why were they scared? Did he really look that bad and evil? The good thing was that after a couple of weeks all the scared first year students would stop being scared. Basically because Kyu did his best in those weeks to seem nice. He basically were a nice boy, BUT when someone really pissed him of he were like the devil and nobody wants to mess with the devil. He smiled to all the students and casually walked over to his locker, throwing his bag in there and hurrying down to his first class. The first class was usually just talking, talking about the summer or hot flirts the students had had.  
 
He walked into the classroom sitting beside one of his  socalled friends. The boy beside him sent Kyu a smille, before he turned his gaze to a girl with blond hair.  Everybody said she was the prettiest girl in class, or maybe even in the entire school. Every single guy on the school had an eye one her. Or almost every single guy. Like the strange boy he was, Kyu didn't found her pretty at all... Or maybe a little, Okay sure she was pretty and all, but he didn't liked the way she acted. She acted like she owned the entire school. The boy beside him turned around to look at Kyu again, who was staring into space. " Camel" He said, poking Kyu on the shoulder. Kyu came back to reality, smiling at his friend. " Yes, Ren what is it?" Ren smiled and leaned closer to Kyu, whispering into his ear. " I think Zin likes you." Ren looked at Soojin again. Kuy turned his head a bit. Ren were right Soojin were staring at him. Ren raised his eyebrows. "Why don't you ask her out, Kyu?" Kyu just shook his head. She wasn't nice, so why bother himself with her presence. She winked at him, trying to look cute. Kyu just shook his head and looked at Ren. Ren furrowed his brows. "Are you serious Kyu? This girl is perfect and as far as i can see, she likes you. Why don't you ask her out?" He stared at Kyu. Kyu just shook his head. He didn't wanted to explain Ren the reasons. 
 
Ren suddenly looked shocked and stood up. "Are you gay?" He said it so loud that all the small talk in the class disappeared. Suddenly everybody were very interested in their conversation. Not that Kyu actually cared. He just shook his head and looked bored. Ren didn't stopped. He poked Kyu on the cheek, " Are you buttom or top?" Kyu just shook his head. If he actually were gay, this would have been a very uncomfortable conversation. Even though Kyu never had felt something romantic for anybody and even though he didn't found Soojin that pretty, he were pretty sure he liked girls. Mostly because anything else would be terrible and secondly because he had never thought a boy looked good or anything except himself of course. Ren shook his head. "You're serious stupid, Kyu. If you aren't gay, what are you then? Blind, stupid, handicapped? Tell me." Ren had sat down beside Kyu again putting his arm around his shoulder. Kyu had the biggest urge to push him away and just leave. Ren was really ignoring, he actually didn't knew why he hung out with him." I guess I just have a different taste than you Ren." Kyu answered him ignored. " Sure you have, you have different taste than all boys on this school. Damn, Camel." Ren got up from his seat and sat on a empty chair beside a guy named Beakho, who was also one of Kyus Socialdemokraterne friends. Kyu shook his head. If Ren didn't wanted his company who cared? The class once more got filled with noises. The others again started small talking. 
 
Kyu just stared into space, thinking about what Ren had said. Ren was right... Every other boy on this school would die, if THE Soojin, winked at them. But Kyu, he just ignored her. All the other boys found her, hot, y, beautifull and sometimes cute. And he himself found her.... Ignoring. Ren were right. You should be blind, stupid or handicapped if you didn't found her hot. And Kyu was pretty sure he wasn't any of does things. Gay then? he shook his head, ignored by the thought. A voice from the back of his head said "maybe" Kyu closed his eyes, just to open them again. There were only one way he could find out if he was... Gay. The word seemed bad even in his head. He looked around. His look landed on Ren and Beakho first. Hm.. Were they... Is it called pretty when it's a boy? Kyu shook his head. Handsome. That was the word. He smiled and looked closer at Ren. Ren actually looked a lot like a girl. His blond hair, were way longer than other boys and his cloth were very girly. He were kind of cute. But he wasn't handsome or pretty. He was nothing. Kyu took a better look at Beakho. He was more masculin than Ren, a lot more actually. He looked very manly. But well... He wasn't handsome or pretty either. Kyu repeated those thoughts with everybody in the class and ended up sighting, not even one had he found pretty or handsome. What was wrong with him. He shook his head, maybe he didn't liked either boys or girls? But what then? He shook his head ignored. Maybe he just hadn't found the right one yet. Or maybe they didn't needed to be pretty or handsome?
 
The bell rang and the teacher entered the class. Smiling bright. Kyu had also had this teacher last year, she was nice. Not to strict and not to sweet. She started saying the students names and write a cross on her paper, if the person was there and said yes. When she had finished, she took a paper from the drawer in her desk. "Today we are going out in the school yard and the principal will hold his usual speech, lets go class." She said and smiled at them all. They all got up from their chairs and started walking down the hall.
 
At the same time in another class, a boy with black hair was sitting in his chair, looking out the window. His new teacher was talking, but he didn't listened. First when Minhyun pricked him on the shoulder and told him to get up, he realized that half of the class were already gone. He smiled to his friend and they quickly ran out of the class after the others. Aron stood by the door, smiling when he saw them. They all tree quickly followed their class. It wasn't a good idea to make them self bad looked at, in their first day at school. The three boys ended in a big yard, with the rest of their class. They stood in the middle and there was so many students around them. "Jr, look isn't that guy your type?" Minhyun said, pointing on a guy with red hair. He smiled shaking his head, the guy was not bad looking, but he didn't have that speciel aura about him, that Jr liked. Minhyun sighed, placing his hand on Aron's . Jr grinned. Everytime the big guy got ignored, his hand automatically landed on Aron's . Aron pushed Minhyuns hand away and pointed. "What about that guy Jr?" Jr looked where Aron pointed. There stood a bluehaired boy, between three blond boys. "Which one of them are you talking about?" Aron smirked. "Him with the blue hair of course, you don't like blond guys." Jr smirked. The blue haired guy turned around so Jr now could see his face. Jr stared. The boy was so handsome. His mouth was open and if Minhyun hadn't hit him on the shoulder, he would had started drolling. Aron smirked. "I guess he is you're type." Jr laughed. "Are you insane. Have you seen him, his ing hot." Minhyun smirked. "Plus, blue is y." Aron sighed, shaking his head.
 
The principal started talking, Jr didn't really listened, he just stared at the blue haired boy. When the principal finished, they walked back to their classes. Jr desperate tried to get a last glance at the boy. Minhyun and Aron was smirking and whispering about Jr. Jr just ignored them. When they came back to class he didn't really listened, he just fantasied about the blue haired boy. 
 

 

So what do you think? Was it interesting? Why? Why not? ^.^

 

I really need someone's opinion :|

 

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elf1999
#1
I loveeee it :) I'm gonna read the story :D
machiavellian
#2
ummmm...its okay :)
just a little bit too long...
babymichiie #3
The story is okay I believe. I think there's a reason why nobody commented? It's a little too long to be honest with you.