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    I, sehun-myung, as the author of 'Inside the mysterious mansion,' 'I'll still love you no matter what,' and 'I love you, I'm sorry,' will change my way of writing.

    If you read my stories, you will know that I use ' for a conversation, but I'm going to change it to " since most of my reader are more comfortable with it.

    In some my stories, my way of writing are a little bit different since I'm trying to use what you guys used to see; you can check the first few chapters in 'I'll still love you no matter what,' I use " as an conversation and I make space between each paragraph.

    I'm going to use " for a conversation but I wont make space between each paragraph.


    For Example:   

A)

Sehun holds my hand while looking at me, I blush at the thought of becoming his girlfriend. Yes, Oh SeHun, the school's kingka asked me to be his girlfriend; I find it weird since I'm not the queenka nor someone who has all the attention. I could feel sincerity radiating from him, love coming out of his eyes, warm that his hand gives me.

 

I put my hand on his cheek while it softly. Out of nowhere, he pull me into a hug and crash his soft lips with mine; my eyes widened while my hand clench his shirt like my life depends on it. Slowly, I close my eyes and start to kiss him back; the feeling of his lips ontop of mine bring me to the seven cloud. He nibble ontop my bottom lip while I do it to his upper lips. His lips is so addicting that I think I need it more than I need air. Air. I forget the fact that we still need to breath, my lungs burn at the minimum amout of oxygen it has right now; I push SeHun away while trying to catch my breath.

 

B) 

   Sehun holds my hand while looking at me, I blush at the thought of becoming his girlfriend. Yes, Oh SeHun, the school's kingka asked me to be his girlfriend; I find it weird since I'm not the queenka nor someone who has all the attention. I could feel sincerity radiating from him, love coming out of his eyes, warm that his hand gives me.

    I put my hand on his cheek while it softly. Out of nowhere, he pull me into a hug and crash his soft lips with mine; my eyes widened while my hand clench his shirt like my life depends on it. Slowly, I close my eyes and start to kiss him back; the feeling of his lips ontop of mine bring me to the seven cloud. He nibble ontop my bottom lip while I do it to his upper lips. His lips is so addicting that I think I need it more than I need air. Air. I forget the fact that we still need to breath, my lungs burn at the minimum amout of oxygen it has right now; I push SeHun away while trying to catch my breath.


    I will use example B since I find it better than example A.

Thank you for your time *bow*

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byun04 #1
The difference is only on the paragraph and the ' and ", we readers wont mind at all
Judges #2
It's up to you dear Author-nim. As long as it does not change the fact that you will still continue your stories. And as i heard, we can request a one shot? If we do, can I request one shot with BaekHyun? I want some fluff in it, can I? *puppy eyes* maybe you can just continue the story that you made as an example, but change it to BaekHyun juseyo. I really want to read BaekHyun story that is created by you since most of your stories is SeHun and Myungsoo; not like I mind, but I want the bias wrecker, Baekhyun, this time. Can you please make it for me? :) LOVE YOU AUTHOR-NIM! 사랑하자!