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I, sehun-myung, as the author of 'Inside the mysterious mansion,' 'I'll still love you no matter what,' and 'I love you, I'm sorry,' will change my way of writing.
If you read my stories, you will know that I use ' for a conversation, but I'm going to change it to " since most of my reader are more comfortable with it.
In some my stories, my way of writing are a little bit different since I'm trying to use what you guys used to see; you can check the first few chapters in 'I'll still love you no matter what,' I use " as an conversation and I make space between each paragraph.
I'm going to use " for a conversation but I wont make space between each paragraph.
For Example:
A)
Sehun holds my hand while looking at me, I blush at the thought of becoming his girlfriend. Yes, Oh SeHun, the school's kingka asked me to be his girlfriend; I find it weird since I'm not the queenka nor someone who has all the attention. I could feel sincerity radiating from him, love coming out of his eyes, warm that his hand gives me.
I put my hand on his cheek while it softly. Out of nowhere, he pull me into a hug and crash his soft lips with mine; my eyes widened while my hand clench his shirt like my life depends on it. Slowly, I close my eyes and start to kiss him back; the feeling of his lips ontop of mine bring me to the seven cloud. He nibble ontop my bottom lip while I do it to his upper lips. His lips is so addicting that I think I need it more than I need air. Air. I forget the fact that we still need to breath, my lungs burn at the minimum amout of oxygen it has right now; I push SeHun away while trying to catch my breath.
B)
Sehun holds my hand while looking at me, I blush at the thought of becoming his girlfriend. Yes, Oh SeHun, the school's kingka asked me to be his girlfriend; I find it weird since I'm not the queenka nor someone who has all the attention. I could feel sincerity radiating from him, love coming out of his eyes, warm that his hand gives me.
I put my hand on his cheek while it softly. Out of nowhere, he pull me into a hug and crash his soft lips with mine; my eyes widened while my hand clench his shirt like my life depends on it. Slowly, I close my eyes and start to kiss him back; the feeling of his lips ontop of mine bring me to the seven cloud. He nibble ontop my bottom lip while I do it to his upper lips. His lips is so addicting that I think I need it more than I need air. Air. I forget the fact that we still need to breath, my lungs burn at the minimum amout of oxygen it has right now; I push SeHun away while trying to catch my breath.
I will use example B since I find it better than example A.
Thank you for your time *bow*
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