I scored a 93!
Hello all!~ I'd just like to share my review that I got for my story, Letters to Forget-Me-Not.
Not that you guys probably care...I just like to talk to myself.
Anyway so her it is! It was done by JI-DEE from OHLOVELY graphics (I think the shops closed now though)
Title- 5/5
Your title is simple yet perfect. It's just right not too boring or dashing.
Description/Foreword- 5/5
Your explained your description well, It's organized and simply detailed. You absolutely made the me want for more.
Grammar/Spelling- 14/15
I didn't see much errors, but the reason why I deduct a point is that I seen typos, but It's alright.
Plot- 15/15
The plot is the best, I never read any kind of fics similar to your plot. Very romantic, cute and it give the mysterious vibe.
Characterization- 14-15
You explained the character details well enough, I don't really have anything to say. I deduct a point because i can't seem to find more development for the antogonist.
Emotion- 19/20
It made me smile. slightly cried but overall it tugged my heartstrings.
Flow- 4/5
It's a godd thing you put obstructions, to make it more interesting. I love the part when Li hau was about to meet him, but got locked by Yoona, I got frustrated.. Lol Which is good, because it instantly made me frantically clicking for the next chapter.
Poster/Background- 5/5
Font/Spacing/Appropriate Paragraphing- 3/5
Your fonts are too big, and the colors hurt my eyes. Sorry :(
Thoughts
Like how the town described Li hau, Your fic is 'EXotic' I upvoted because you deserve it. Good Job !
Overall enjoyment- 9/10
Recived points: 93/100
Reviewed by: JI-DEE
Anyway thanks so much JI-DEE!
And if any of you guys have read my story I am currently editing it and if any of you have an reccomendations on how I could fix it please tell me.^^
Thanks for reading bye!~
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