A Song That I Composed...

Heyy!

Can u guys help me right now?

I made like half of a song... and I don't know how to continue this.

Here you go you can listen:

I am so stuck in my own song! If you help me, you're awesome!

-Miyuki2001

 

(I am so sorry for my crappy voice, I can explain! I wasn't born very talented!)

(Dear Myungkitty Unnie, I told you that you  will regret saying your voice is bad!)

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Supercrazydog #1
Awesome melody and voice, except idk how to help cause I couldn't pick up on the lyrics and your voice is unclear, but maybe that's because of the recording?
Iloveanime #2
FRICKING HELL?! Gurl, u have WAAAYYYY more musical talent than me, I c just started cello and u can sing better than me! Times 100! And, @ihavenofriends2920, I cant play piano, so u r better. I'm not very musical :(
ihavenofriends2920 #3
You have more musical talent than me I can only play the piano
And that's super easy but you.....you can play the guitar now that's amazing !!!

and you voice is not as bad as you say it is!!!
sophinesty #4
well..I loved the melody..but i can't hear your voice clearly..maybe because of the audio?..But your voice daebak!!!Awesome!!^^
sehunsighs #5
Damn. I can't even sing. DUDE YOU'RE FRICKEN AWESOME. I like it ^^
YeoJaGaSu #6
Lol. This is pretty good. What,s it called? If you want help, can you type out the lyrics for me? Btw, the structure of the song should be more like:
Intro
Verse 1
Chorus
Verse 2
Chorus
Bridge
Ending

I don't think your structure was very good, nor lyric choice. But I loved the melody!
And I think I can help. :)
IcyWish #7
Cool!
I like the music.. um, the guitar, yeah!!
And I'm sorry to say that I don't have any idea how to continue it!! >.< *cries*
I wasn't born musical!

But your voice sounds really good!!
Of course, the audio might've made it sound worse. I'd like to hear u in real life again! ^.^
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