★ Title: [5/5]

Even though your title didn't match the story very well, it really pulled me in to read it, which is what most authors aim to do. 

★ Story Poster/Background: [8/10]

Your background is very simplistic, which is good, but it didn't really relate to the story. I can see how you might connect pink with love, but otherwise, not really.

★ Foreword & Description: [8/10]

A short description for a short story, seems like a pretty good fit. I can't really critique your description, because the story was short as well. I like how you put the rating, genre, and number of words. It's all professional, except for the spelling mistake in the last sentence, "reuqest." I understand that typos happen, so I didn't deduct much points.

★ Plot: [11/20]

This is where your story lacks detail. The entire drabble is just them making out. I don't quite know anyone who would spend 2 minutes to read details about a kiss. Nothing interesting happens, and that's the key, even in a drabble/oneshot.

 ★Characterization: [7/10]

I understand that, because your story is short, you couldn't afford the time to build on characters. You kind of did though, when you said that Woosang is younger, but Aoora is more energetic. Therefore, I gave you some of your points back.

★ Originality: [2/5]

Your story is original, whilst being unoriginal at the same time. I'm sure there are other stories out there that only talk about their biases (OTPs) kissing, but yours is short and sweet, while doing the same purpose.

★Flow: [7/10]

I think the flow was rather, er, fast. All of a sudden they're kissing, and that's all they do. Even though they don't go beyond making out, the flow isn't well balanced.

★ Grammar & Spelling: [17/20]

There are some grammatical errors, "Teeth are showing as the smile at one another." You could change it to, "They can see each other's teeth as they smile at each other." This makes the sentence flow better and it changes the typo.

★ Overall Enjoyment: [2/5]

★Bonus points: [1/5]

I don't quite know why the bonus points are here for, but I gave them back to you because your grammar wasn't as bad as some writers. And kudos to you for writing this after a test, and finding the time to type it all up and upload it.

★Total: [67/100]

Reviewer's comments:

Work on the plot. That's all, thanks for requesting, sorry it took so long, AP exams were killer.