I actually managed to write a song about my lil brother...this is a part of a songwriting contest. I need honest opinions on it, please help me out by listening and giving your opinion on it...it will help me out!

 

Here's the link to the file is right here. Lyrics are below so you can follow along...please help me out with this one! Thank you!!!!

 

Actually, it's been changed to an instrumental contest now...but do not fret, I have remedied the track and is now a very pretty instrumental. I hope you like it, and please give me feedback on it. It was be most helpful! Let me know if you love it, hate it, not your cup of tea...whatever! :D Thank You!

 

Here is the new instrumental version to this song. ENJOY!!!

 

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Long ago, we made a promise

That no matter what happened

We’d never part

We were children

In a cold lonely world

I made a promise 

To stay by your side

 

We’re adults now

There’s no need to cry

Like the scared child

You hide inside

 

We made a promise

A truce if you will

No matter what happened

We’d never part

 

We’ve managed

To make it this far

I’m a year older

But none  the wiser

 

I made a promise

To not leave your side

You made me promise

You made me promise

 

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