I am writing a new gtop story but English is not my first language.

I am trying my best to use English better and I also use spell check. I read at least 2 times after I finish writing but when I look back at my posts I realize my grammar and spelling mistakes so it would be better if I can find someone who can check after I finish writing. If someone is interested to be my beta, please contact me.

Here is the information about the new story:

MARELAND

Description

Aina wants elf king Seunghyun to find lost demon prince Jiyong and protect him. Seunghyun finds the little demon but what will happen next? What are Aina’s plans for them? What is the role of Jiyong and Seunghyun to bring peace to Mareland again? Will the big prophecy come true?

Mareland: This is the world of oceans. Whenever you go; you can always see the sea in Mareland. You can see the most beautiful and green forests in Mareland. You can smell the most beautiful air in Mareland. It is a world where sorcerers, elves, menelin and the other creatures live together. But there is no peace in Mareland now. Nobody trusts each other and there is big restless feeling in their hearts since Aina left the Mareland. It was Mareland’s punishment for breaking the rules.

Aina: The holly and immortal creature. She used to live in Mareland and watch over God’s children but after they broke the peace and killed each other she left Mareland and never helped the children again. Sometimes she sends messages only speaking with the Amandil (some kind of a reverend person, like a priest).

Races of Mareland

Elves: They possess the element of water. They are the most ancient and wise race in Mareland. Their kingdom is called “Calima”. Elves are beautiful and kind creatures but they are also the most powerful fighters in Mareland.

Menelin: They possess the element of air. Their kingdom is Isilnore. Menelin and Elves don’t like each other, they never get along.

Demons: They used to possess the element of fire. They are the only creature who can also possess a dragon. Demon kingdom “Anarnore” had lost in the Big War about 18 years ago and their kingdom had been destroyed by elves and menelin. There is only a few demons are alive in Mareland but there is no heir for the kingdom.

Sorcerers: They possess the element of earth. They have an ability to make different kinds of spells. Their race is so rare and there is not much sorcerers in Mareland in these days. They don’t have their own kingdom. Some chose to side with elves and some chose to side with menelin.

Amandil: A very very rare race. Amandil live longer than the other races and never gets old. They are one of the most beautiful creatures in Mareland. They have an ability to speak with Aina.

Dragons: Very big and powerful creatures that was made of fire. This race is also very rare; it is not easy to see a dragon in these days in Mareland.

Main Characters

Seunghyun: A young elf king. He has an Amandil so he can listen to Aina’s words. Now Aina wanted him to find the demon prince.

Jiyong: A very young demon prince raised by menelin. He doesn’t even know he is a demon. When his kingdom was destroyed he was saved by a menelin and he was only a baby demon back then. Nobody knows that demon kingdom has an heir except from Seunghyun now.

Taeyang: A very powerful sorcerer. He is Seunghyun’s right hand.

Daesung: The most powerful elf soldier in Calima and he is the commander of Seunghyun’s army.

Seungri: A young menelin. He is Jiyong’s only friend.

Jaejoong: Amandil. The only creature who can speak to Aina. Everybody respects him.

Note: I personally love Kim Jaejoong (JYJ) a lot. While I was thinking about the characters Jaejoong immediately came to my mind as Amandil. Since he is too beautiful, he really fits with the character so I hope you don’t mind him in this story.