my first fanfiction

thanks 4   JlovesB2STand tomyidol 

for supporting me to write my own story....

so,, here are the review..

 

 

tiltle: Me and My Bestfriends 

Tags: B2ST/BEAST, other artis such as Jung Yong Hwa(CNBLUE) , Jung Jin Young(B1A4), sONG sEUNG hYUN(FT ISLAND), Zico(Block-B)

 

review: 

One day when you were all by yourself minding you own business when a girl came up to you and said

"Hey Shin Yoo Na, do you want to be my friend?" she asked full of sincere but somehow you feel if you be friends with her your whole world of peacefulness will be gone. But  of course you can not refuse since her face were all hopefulness, hoping my answer would be yes. So you nodded and smiled. since that day your whole world starts to change. But one thing for sure, you world is now full of craziness and exciting...

When 'her' friends,(BEAST) control her from be friend with you. what do you do to gain their trust in you?

 

 

-leave your comment on what you think of my story-

if you guys think is good. I'll keep on writing and post it as a story

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JaceSter8
#1
It seems really nice. Hehe!
Looking forward to it! ^^
yoena_B2uty #2
oke i'll take you advice,, thanks ice_coffee
ice_coffee
#3
hwaiting with your FF

its sounds good, to capture more attention put add some more reviews of ur story or the outline or it just a suggestion XD


Hwaiting XD