Another graphic!! Please do tell me what I can improve on!

:D Please help me! A little bit harsh(not too harsh) comments is needed for this poster :D

I submitted it already. And I'm actually not hoping to win or anything (well, hoping for honorable mentions haha)

link to contest

I used this picture xD

 

This was supposed to be angst but then it ended up looking good as a horror poster ('cause of the coloring)

So I just added the stock photos below xD I don't like horror so I didn't put a scary, creepy ugh face T_T *cries bucket of tears*

COMMENTS AND CRITICS ARE LOVED!

I'm bothered by the gate.. but oh wells :))

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pathedox--
#1
It's good :D
Starlit_Sapphires
#2
Ooh....it's good xP
cxsmicskies
#3
I'm no expert on the angst but I think it would be nice if it was desaturated, gritty, & dirty except the things that were important in the story, you know like a grunge photo ( like http://netdna.webdesignerdepot.com/uploads/grunge_photography/dark-44.jpg ) and the main focus should be the thing that catches your attention first. Don't use too saturated colors since it wouldn't really fit an angst-y vibe. If you want to delete a certain part of the poster without really destroying the thing (just in case you change your mind) then I recommend to use a layer mask to easily hide/show the elements of your edit (like the gate in your opinion). Its a very nice poster though :D i like how yiu used stock images instead of just the idol/uljjang pictures