hey everyone i know that i'm not really well kown here on AFF but i was wondering if you guys were willing to read my story and give me some feed back i feel like its missing a lot but i dont know what so if you guys have free time or are just really bored please check it out

yes - it is hetero sorry all my fellow lovers out there

Yes - it is a fanfic with an oc in it

it is also a ZICO fanfic so if you dont like him just change the character i mean i really think anyone could fit his part wich is really sad but yeah

so please just help me out a bit

thank you!

ps almost forgot its called "Broken"

here is the link to it

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/403811/broken-blockb-zicoandoc