Forever My Everything Story Review

Forever My Everything By shawol-elf.

 


Might I say that this is one YOU story that I couldn't stop reading. It's in the POV of YOU obviously, and has Lee Jinki (Onew) of SHINee as the main love interest.

Let me start off by saying that I love the fact that Onew is the main love interest in this story. I believe Onew is an underused SHINee member. But Shawol-elf does a great job at incorporating his wonderful personality. It's rather short, and reads as Completed now, yet it explains so much about the past of Onew and the reader. Shawol-elf does such a great job in explaining the feelings of the characters and the relationship between the two.

I don't want to give too much away but I love the ending. I do feel, however, that this story should be continued as there are many things that are "clift-hung" as some would say. With the way it ends now, it sort of has that typical "Happily Ever After" feeling. Even though if you really pay attention to other aspects of the story, you'll know that there can't be a "Happily Ever After" to this story. At least not without addressing two things: Tiffany, and Onew's graduation.

Other than that, I highly recommend reading and subscribing to this story, whether or not Shawol-elf decides to keep it a oneshot.. It's a beautiful piece, and might I add I dropped a few tears multiple times reading it.

 


http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/390329/forever-my-everything-onew-romance-shinee-you

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shawol-elf
#1
Thanks sooo much! For the review and the nice things you said! It makes me really happy!
shiny125
#2
I really love that somtory also!!!♥♡♥